So for anyone who actually read this story, and for the even fewer people who give a damn if it continues, I'll start by ssying that it is a finished story, I just never got around to copy/pasting the rest of it to Penana. As for the real reason this is here: after not writing for the better part of a year, I took a gander back at this story and wasn't too pleased with what I found, so I started working on a second draft, which js oretty different from this version so far, but maintains almost the same storyline (just with imrpoved pacing/characters/writing in genersl). In the unlikely event thag anyone actually wants to see it, I'll post what I've got so far. Furthermore, if anyone wants to collaborate on it, I'd be absolutley open to it, considering I'm currently drowning in writers block.
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