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[Grade] Angel Wings of Dust

Nicole Armas ⋅ 8 years ago

Title: Angel Wings of Dust
Link: https://www.penana.com/story/4728/angel-wings-of-dust/toc
Genre: Supernatural, War, Dark
Summary: A desperate struggle for earth has begun as angel and demon fight tooth and nail for supremacy. The Archangel Michael is entrusted to lead Heaven's armies against the forces of darkness but victory proves to come at a devastating cost.

I'm just wondering in what areas of the story and writing I could improve on. Thanks in advance!

Anastasiabelle ⋅ 8 years ago

HI :) I can grade it :) Might take longer than usual but do you want me to pm you?

Nicole Armas ⋅ 8 years ago

@Anastasiabelle, Sure! I don't mind waiting and you can PM when you're done :)

Anastasiabelle ⋅ 8 years ago

@Nicole Armas, :) I'll pm you when I'm done

Anastasiabelle ⋅ 8 years ago

@Nicole Armas, I
m sorry for taking a long time but I'll pm you very soon!

Nicole Armas ⋅ 8 years ago

@Anastasiabelle, Alright no problem

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