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大家好,今天我將爲海貍的作品《夢、時空、裂痕》寫下心得。8964 copyright protection319PENANA1azTtWDnmP 維尼
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首先,依然不厭其煩地先説明我對於心得的想法。8964 copyright protection319PENANA5mAoCIh2nq 維尼
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在這個寫得好並不代表一定有人氣的嚴苛環境下,我希望心得不只是單純挖掘作者可進步的點,還希望作者能夠獲得動力完成作品,甚至……8964 copyright protection319PENANAzpsNgoZHXY 維尼
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……能夠讓心得替這部作品召來更多讀者。8964 copyright protection319PENANAwrzzA5Seuy 維尼
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有鑒於此,本心得將會分爲兩個部分:8964 copyright protection319PENANAZMu4T7D5Bn 維尼
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事不宜遲,現在開始。8964 copyright protection319PENANALi1LfDKuXE 維尼
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1)寫給讀者的宣傳式心得8964 copyright protection319PENANAdfm4xwOHiE 維尼
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首先,《夢、時空、裂痕》是個怎樣的故事呢?8964 copyright protection319PENANAfoO0ve5MxR 維尼
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根據我閲讀的範圍,這是一個關於女主角在現實生活是作家,但睡覺做夢時,卻會進入另一個時空(?),在奇幻背景的世界裏化身成同名的貴族之女,展開另一段人生。8964 copyright protection319PENANAqWNrnOh6sR 維尼
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稍微透露一點,女主角在夢裏并非普通人,而是擁有特殊能力的……就劇透到這裏。8964 copyright protection319PENANAHM1cUi9DBL 維尼
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當然,夢與現實并非徹底分割,反而有所連結。8964 copyright protection319PENANAoKi9Nt3IuM 維尼
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女主角會帶著現實的記憶到夢裏,在奇幻世界提出沒人知道的「棒球」,同時也會帶著那裏的記憶回來現實,並以自己的經歷為藍本,出版了一本小説。8964 copyright protection319PENANAYdHAoIbyiB 維尼
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因爲這樣,其他也能在夢與現實之間穿越的人士,開始注意到了女主角。8964 copyright protection319PENANAkfhisAlWcr 維尼
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目前只知道一位,但感覺未來會更多?8964 copyright protection319PENANAfLzd4qzocJ 維尼
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想當初,第一次遇到這部作品時,我内心的想法就是「哇……誰那麽勇?居然像我一樣,敢於挑戰夢與現實穿插的故事?」。8964 copyright protection319PENANAJMDcZBGu77 維尼
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事實證明,作者憑藉著本身扎實的寫故事功力,配得上這個「勇」字。8964 copyright protection319PENANArJmngJbrXn 維尼
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總之,同一部作品,兩個不同世界觀的劇情,但又彼此相關,換句話説,這不就是買一送一的大優惠作品嗎?8964 copyright protection319PENANAsjBULocm2x 維尼
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這麽值得的優惠,當然要趁機把握了!8964 copyright protection319PENANAQVBOvJO3Pb 維尼
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不過,閲讀這部作品需要點耐心,畢竟主角在夢與現實之間穿插,兩個世界的故事都要寫一寫,導致劇情的進展較慢。8964 copyright protection319PENANALCOIr7tjHB 維尼
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我閱讀了前面十五章,似乎夢的部份才剛讓主要角色登場完畢,棋盤上的棋子差不多擺好位置,劇情正要開始。8964 copyright protection319PENANAj0Zp7R9LTP 維尼
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但若有耐心,又想得到買一送一大優惠的各位,歡迎點擊以下連結:8964 copyright protection319PENANAhWz2CeZCkI 維尼
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以上就是《寫給讀者的宣傳式心得》。8964 copyright protection319PENANAreqpXW5mmr 維尼
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2)面向作者的分享式心得(含劇透)8964 copyright protection319PENANAlfrS36HiEM 維尼
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就像上面所説的,作者基本功扎實,也沒什麽好挑的。8964 copyright protection319PENANARpUYgUPWHn 維尼
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前面十五章都還在帶出主要角色,比較令我有深刻印象的,就是女主角原來是紅術師,似乎能夠期待她發揮能力的劇情。8964 copyright protection319PENANAPpvysFI8ZH 維尼
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如果之後證明每個紅術師都是可以穿越在夢與現實之間,而不是僅限於男女主角,那就更好玩了。8964 copyright protection319PENANA2Lpg050Y83 維尼
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目前最好奇的,反而是角色們用英文字母寫出來的名字。8964 copyright protection319PENANAHxtctilI3I 維尼
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我看了看《角色設定》,也沒列出來,其實頗感失望。8964 copyright protection319PENANAcQeTRLxylL 維尼
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爲什麽會那麽在意呢?8964 copyright protection319PENANAXMc8ZTArje 維尼
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因爲我個人對於中文字呈現的西方名字,其實很難記在腦海裏。8964 copyright protection319PENANAr2PDScGBSm 維尼
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畢竟身爲馬來西亞華人,身邊大多數的人名字,我都用英文或馬來文字母去記,很少用中文名,除非對方是華人。8964 copyright protection319PENANAh8apR7lZBv 維尼
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閲讀方面也是,任何英文書籍,我都傾向於閲讀原版,例如《哈利波特》全系列,而不會特地尋找中文翻譯版。8964 copyright protection319PENANAKlKfZGnsXG 維尼
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這造成我在面對西方名字時,比起瑟琳,我會更記得Seline。(自己翻譯,應該錯誤吧?)8964 copyright protection319PENANA5Sh5bz6jti 維尼
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特地提出這點,是感覺可能會有其他海外華人跟我一樣,所以作者若想要攻略更多海外讀者,可以稍加注意。8964 copyright protection319PENANA6ce2TCZMQ4 維尼
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順便説一下,這部作品的寫文風格非常有翻譯文學的味道,我有時讀著讀著,會不自覺地把某些句子或對白想像成英文。8964 copyright protection319PENANAU5gFRMUPqo 維尼
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以上就是我的心得,説實話能寫的不多,畢竟找不到明顯的缺點。8964 copyright protection319PENANAVtZlduHqkZ 維尼
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唯一的遺憾是劇情進展不夠快,這也是爲什麽我盡量拖延到最後一刻才發佈心得,想説再讀多幾章,看看還能再寫些什麽。8964 copyright protection319PENANAhJkg1i3Cul 維尼
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當然,我並不認爲這是缺點,純粹是劇情格局龐大。8964 copyright protection319PENANAGXOKOvFGDD 維尼
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希望以後閲讀完整本後,我能寫個更詳細的心得。8964 copyright protection319PENANAIu1SQ6MrrH 維尼
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想説的就這些,勇者海貍請繼續加油!8964 copyright protection319PENANARjmb6xyy7Y 維尼
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