.... I'm sorry. I make a comeback than I get crazy busy.
Bobby, you are the obvious winner. You have a way of making your reader not only understand and empathize, but become your character. It sent flash backs for me anyway hahaha
Nature Girl, your name gives you away ;) express! Close your eyes and describe the smells around you. Taste something and feel the weight of it on your tongue. Descriptive language is so important. You don't need to be a poet (though we could all learn a thing or two from them ;) ) This will improve your writing greatly, show your passion for nature. 597Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9RWfv4c9Km
Knight of the Rebellion - look up fun destruction words and play with them. Anything with the onomatopoeia feel such as "KABOOM" to a good ol' thesaurus.com search. I'm sure you'll enjoy killing or blowing up things in future writings!! 597Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUVgnabtYkR
PM me if we want to me read your stuff - I've always loved watching writers grow! Thankyou for entering, and sorry for the delay! 597Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN8zY2HaTbK
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