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醜奴兒-君意憐

蘇笙晚

Sep 29, 2016

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陌上花落君憐斷，雨畔清幽，雨畔清幽，醉夢霓裳晚來秋。

臨風墨舞凭欄處，月銀廉鉤，月銀廉鉤，欲已凝愁淚先流。

其他人寫的都好好阿!!!我想了好幾天呢…(已癱....

其實，淚先流是學校國文老師上課時上到的詞，沒記錯的話是武陵春，它啟發了我創作這段詞...。有點傷感多多海涵 😂

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