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這是我的一篇詩名為「雨後」,希望大家可以看完後寫篇雨前,祝大家好運!!

灰濛濛

天上的火球

逃避在灰幔之後

聽 —-

嘩啦,嘩嘩啦,嘩嘩啦啦

聽 —-

淅瀝,淅淅瀝,淅淅瀝瀝 

聽 —-


金燦燦

天上的火球

顯現在青帳之中


你我在彩虹漫步

耀目的色彩

在心中


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