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    因緣際會下在今年開始寫作,主要寫小說、詩詞、無侷限的文字創作,希望大神們能多多支持謝謝。
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學。「押韻」
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害怕
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母親
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新生
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還好
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再見
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「遺憾無用 總會留下遺憾

 欲望無用 我買不了時間

 思念無用 就快再次相見

 我會找個好位置

看看大樹和海洋

從繁榮到凋零會是什麼模樣

給世界第一次也是

最後一次陪伴」


這是第一首詩,我是個新手,寫作新手,此平台的新手,我不太了解發佈作品的操作,以至於我把作品打在了首篇,這樣也好,一目了然,一看就知道這作品是在寫詩,其實我把這作品取名叫「半生」,我怎麼找都找不到我該去哪裡改標題,也沒關係,人生就是這樣,一個意外接著一個意外,也許叫世界末日也挺好聽的,人生本來也就是一種末日,至於為什麼叫半生,是因為靈感來源於我至此的人生,人生都還沒過半,三分之一、四分之一的也不好聽,乾脆就取名叫半生,誰知道我這一生會在哪裡停止呢?


原本我是想拿詩去比賽的,只是比賽太麻煩,要寄這個寄那個的,我只好放棄了不會屬於我的獎金了,有投有機會嘛!別笑我!雖然我沒機會了,然後有不止一人說我寫的文字像是歌詞,長篇大論幾百字的那種也說像歌詞,像歌詞沒有不好,可能就是我的風格,我從讀書時期寫文字都是搭配著音樂在寫的,可能這有點影響,不過我認為現代詩就是現代人用現代語言寫的詩,李白或白居易寫的深澀難懂的那些詩在他那個年代也可以說是他那年代的現代詩對吧?所以就算是歌詞,以現代詩自由的格式來說,我認為就算作品只有一句話也能是新詩,話就說到這,請大家多多批評、多多關照,拜託不要吝嗇對我的打賞,幫個忙按個喜歡或是留言寫下你的任何想法,也許能成為我創作的靈感,我只是一個小作家,非常需要大家的支持才能繼續前進,謝謝大家🙏

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#1
學。「押韻」
1 Like
113 Reads
0 Comments
#2
青春
1 Like
76 Reads
0 Comments
#3
初戀
1 Like
62 Reads
0 Comments
#4
我活著
1 Like
75 Reads
0 Comments
#5
摯愛(一)「押韻」
1 Like
72 Reads
0 Comments
#6
摯愛(二)「押韻」
1 Like
101 Reads
0 Comments
#7
遺忘
0 Likes
89 Reads
0 Comments
#8
如果
0 Likes
84 Reads
0 Comments
#9
照相機
0 Likes
77 Reads
0 Comments
#10
念念不忘
0 Likes
55 Reads
0 Comments
#11
隔代親
0 Likes
80 Reads
0 Comments
#12
遺憾
0 Likes
73 Reads
0 Comments
#13
失眠
0 Likes
59 Reads
0 Comments
#14
將就
0 Likes
68 Reads
0 Comments
#15
0 Likes
51 Reads
0 Comments
#16
貪心無欲
0 Likes
43 Reads
0 Comments
#17
過節的孤獨
0 Likes
52 Reads
0 Comments
#18
害怕
0 Likes
83 Reads
0 Comments
#19
母親
0 Likes
77 Reads
0 Comments
#20
新生
0 Likes
79 Reads
0 Comments
#21
初為人子
0 Likes
57 Reads
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#22
初為父母
0 Likes
52 Reads
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#23
時間
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54 Reads
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#24
來不及
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45 Reads
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#25
恐慌症
0 Likes
39 Reads
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#26
死亡
0 Likes
64 Reads
0 Comments
#27
新詩
0 Likes
57 Reads
0 Comments
#28
0 Likes
58 Reads
0 Comments
#29
我想在雨中奔跑
0 Likes
36 Reads
0 Comments
#30
標點符號
0 Likes
54 Reads
0 Comments
#31
還好
0 Likes
54 Reads
0 Comments
#32
父親
0 Likes
96 Reads
0 Comments
#33
社交恐懼
1 Like
95 Reads
0 Comments
#34
勇氣
0 Likes
76 Reads
0 Comments
#35
伯樂
0 Likes
84 Reads
0 Comments
#36
信仰
0 Likes
70 Reads
0 Comments
#37
向日葵
0 Likes
68 Reads
0 Comments
#38
創世
0 Likes
63 Reads
0 Comments
#39
旅程
0 Likes
80 Reads
0 Comments
#40
再見
0 Likes
59 Reads
0 Comments
#41
0 Likes
72 Reads
0 Comments

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