So, it's set in a non-specific olden-days time. There are multiple main characters, multiple perspectives. a LOT of VIOLENCE in case you're not interested in that. It may be a gay story, but is it a love story?
I might separate it into parts as well as chapters. That feels more tidy.
This time I'm going to be more descriptive and use more flowery language because it's fun and that's what kind of story it is.
It takes place over about a decade of time, so buckle up :)