I'm a traveler of stories and I want to improve my craft so I can do justice to anything I write. Would appreciate constructive criticism and maybe a friend or two.
My Website: https://blankmarkswriter.wordpress.com/
Games I've worked on and made: https://blankmarks.itch.io/
This is a short story I recently wrote for a magazine that got rejected so I'm going to put it on here and Writing.com. I would appreciate any criticism so I can approve.
The story is about the first time our current idea of death took a life.