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挑毛病:運之天命(書評)
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對，亦如其名，請各位......挑我小說的毛病。

可以是標點符號、格式、形容、用詞，乃至錯字；甚至宣傳手法，反正儘管挑就對了！如果你心情不爽還可以再書評裡夾雜幾句罵我的，只要有用我一律接受！

三百的獎金是我的小小心意，希望大家都來挑挑看。

小說傳送門：

https://www.penana.com/story/57593/%E9%81%8B%E4%B9%8B%E5%A4%A9%E5%91%BD/toc

對，亦如其名，請各位......挑我小說的毛病。

可以是標點符號、格式、形容、用詞，乃至錯字；甚至宣傳手法，反正儘管挑就對了！如果你心情不爽還可以再書評裡夾雜幾句罵我的，只要有用我一律接受！

三百的獎金是我的小小心意，希望大家都來挑挑看。

小說傳送門：

https://www.penana.com/story/57593/%E9%81%8B%E4%B9%8B%E5%A4%A9%E5%91%BD/toc

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