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          我拿到之前課堂作好的作文，分數超出我的預算，而且老師的評語頗正面，講我用字雕琢，運用了大量比喻，開首優美。可是他說我的文有點曖味，「我」和「你」好像一對情侶，而非朋友，並且内容不夠豐富。

　　「欲窮千里目，更上一層樓。」我應該要做得更美好，超越這個成績，不然，我不會斷言放棄。

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#0 Intro
#1 二
#2 三
#3 廢話一則
#4 五
#5 詩·無題
#6 七
#7 英文測驗後
#8 九
#9 十
#10 安慰話
#11 河童
#12 歸園田居
#13 上課
#14 星期五
#15 圖書館
#16 閲讀
#17 詩詞
#18 假日
#19 閒餘時間
#20 SBA
#21 邊緣人
#22 我心血來潮寫的
#23 看書
#24 擔憂
#25 休閒時讀讀
#26 十月三十日
#27 下午時分
#28 10月31日
#29 讀詩日子
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