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No Plagiarism!fDXtUFbx3LO82UjiYq56posted on PENANA 這是最近為了擴充詞彙庫四處看看的一點心得感想,裡面充斥著無聊的個人偏好,純粹是用來警惕自己,裡面找不到任何有價值的東西,意見相左的請自行離開,這裡不接受任何反駁──!8964 copyright protection540PENANAfVQzUpcDsE 維尼
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故事開始前就用口語化的敘述去描述世界觀。8964 copyright protection540PENANAOlzy6RiZRA 維尼
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等、等等、等等等給我等一下!8964 copyright protection540PENANA08JH1jUmxG 維尼
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在故事開始之前就為了讓讀者更方便進入幻想世界是很好,可是你不要用寫日記的口吻在寫嘛,詩句、古文等可以很好醞釀那股傳奇感,你寫得太直白好破壞氣氛哪!8964 copyright protection540PENANAheyuPfZ5M3 維尼
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一次塞入過多角色。8964 copyright protection540PENANAF9gfttS2pw 維尼
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這是很常見的錯誤,我曾經看過有作者前面寫的還不錯,結果到了第四、五章一口氣塞了超過七、八名新角色,每個角色的描述差不多都是類似的「俊男美女」,俊你媽啦,複製人大軍進攻、角色辨識困難,每個人講話都沒有特色,根本是透過角色的嘴巴代替作者自言自語,這個超雷,宇宙無敵大雷!8964 copyright protection540PENANA4q83d15qZa 維尼
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我看到厲害的作家都會很仔細仔細地慢慢建立、構築角色形象,你在兩、三千字內一口氣塞「重要」角色進去還能成功刻畫的話,就已經是職業作家了!8964 copyright protection540PENANAmX2cs7dQLy 維尼
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在還沒讓讀者跟角色建立感情就開始惡意賣萌8964 copyright protection540PENANApfgM2Pcl33 維尼
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這個跟警惕二其實是息息關關的,最近看了一部作品,作者在第二話就塞了兩個女角,兩個女角的外型在粗略介紹一下之後就是惡意賣萌。8964 copyright protection540PENANAOqLYZEu8yX 維尼
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女角很香我知道,妹子誰不愛呢!8964 copyright protection540PENANAQpKtXm1YUU 維尼
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可是、可是、可是,最可惡的就是這個可是,我還沒有深刻的認識她們,因為作者描述她們可能還沒超過一千字,其中就有角色溫言軟語的爬上主角大腿開始誘惑他是怎麼一回事啦?8964 copyright protection540PENANAHVVD8cNpeN 維尼
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現在人都這麼開放的嗎?我可不覺得自己老了啊!8964 copyright protection540PENANAo0o7ApA6ra 維尼
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在側寫還不充足的情況下就走唐突的賣萌路線,我只好唐突的離開您的作品了。8964 copyright protection540PENANAPp9LylZcPR 維尼
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開頭一、兩萬字內就開始拼命地塞只有作者自己在乎的設定8964 copyright protection540PENANA9WNGWdHD3V 維尼
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這個、這個、這個真的是無可饒恕的雷點。8964 copyright protection540PENANACsxGo1s236 維尼
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閱讀一部作品最快令吸引讀者記憶點的是角色,角色的魅力必須充足,才能吸引讀者一步一步接著下去看(個人式心得,充斥偏見,請酌量吸收)8964 copyright protection540PENANAUxdgqAC5Pn 維尼
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我都還沒有跟你筆下的角色建立感情,你就拿設定還有世界觀砸的我頭暈眼花,誰理你啊!8964 copyright protection540PENANAwfXMsZbcBb 維尼
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你的作品夠有趣我會自動忽略你筆下的設定,專注於情節發展。8964 copyright protection540PENANAlfKBmESteR 維尼
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你的作品不夠有趣我立馬就上一頁,謝謝不再聯絡了好嗎!8964 copyright protection540PENANAsadx3GgCP1 維尼
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備註:這篇文章會依作者的心得適時添加全新的內容,請勿當成最終修訂版本8964 copyright protection540PENANAwE68MnSC4I 維尼
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