作品:【魚魚創挑第六期】那年盛夏,曾經的約定
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類型:新詩
作者:胤宸
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自第三期創挑【冬季戀愛】中,篇#50中胤宸的不言冬,所寫道:
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六出飛花舞翩翩,瓊枝青竹直挺挺。287Please respect copyright.PENANAM3b0qbhjmu
月明疏樓掩枯葉,夜寒襲來滿枝紅。287Please respect copyright.PENANA87U8tPkWVH
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與本次夏日主題所對比。
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曲院一壺酒,西湖一片荷。287Please respect copyright.PENANAQ8jUnxKhMs
殘陽孤山影,惜未有風來。287Please respect copyright.PENANAASeETvZcfG
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其中發現,共通是等待不到依人的那分情摯,如那朔風吹拂,枯葉盡落;又譬如薰風颯爽,荷香肆意。
夕陽孤山遠,好似逐漸走遠的影跡,只好續杯今夜自醉來忘情。
夏日不僅僅是場曾經共赴的約定,也可能為內心與自己的誓約,曲院雖一人,卻多了一份兩人的回憶。
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花自飄零水自流。287Please respect copyright.PENANA9tXSQqmx6P
一種相思,兩處閒愁。287Please respect copyright.PENANAn37mf1Gy4U
此情無計可消除,才下眉頭,卻上心頭。287Please respect copyright.PENANAhS72hA5Emx
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同如<<李清照>>的一剪梅,而這西湖庭院盈滿的荷風又與易安居士筆下那殘荷,抽象暨不易捉摸的思想感情相較,誰更勝一籌呢?287Please respect copyright.PENANAmLouKeTVKV
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獨賞荷葉,飄蕩於塘邊,一抹光照滑過一池漣漪。卻無心這番閒情逸致,內心仍未那尚未赴約的風而風,掛記了心頭,酒、荷、影皆為而動,卻因那三缺一的風美中不足。287Please respect copyright.PENANA0ono6SB79X
慧開禪師那經典一句「春有百花秋有月,夏有涼風冬有雪,若無閒事掛心頭,便是人間好時節。」 而其中「若無閒事在心頭」更是把心中沒有掛慮,便是好時節詮釋的淋漓盡致。287Please respect copyright.PENANAhhLMBlP4HX
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人生在世,總為數不清的事情苦惱、煩躁,如果可真心放下了這些東西,簡直美麗得太過不要了。287Please respect copyright.PENANAW4INS5hMwg
風,是否能在夏日再次吹拂。287Please respect copyright.PENANADl4HeSAWCn
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我們仍未可知。但卻明白另一事,眼前這番美酒,如果可以那便今朝有酒今朝醉吧。