A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAeQGG0BnLDO
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—449Please respect copyright.PENANALAhbT6KQRQ
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAaR8qYqSazy
你指標題?449Please respect copyright.PENANAFZZWSqKE6c
但有時訂標題也很困難~449Please respect copyright.PENANAWZGPobMP2j
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANANlfA5ntJwn
嗯對啊,449Please respect copyright.PENANAfLba7u7ijK
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANA91wkjCMOti
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,449Please respect copyright.PENANAASAvQwcJNO
所以沒有中心思想在。449Please respect copyright.PENANAw1aecIZyQi
我猜的對嗎?
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAkNWadXkkg9
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。449Please respect copyright.PENANAkMYyxwYG9U
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?449Please respect copyright.PENANA0u7ojvfyoj
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANARfYDvvP58w
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!449Please respect copyright.PENANA6YagJ57gcj
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAbrSWUov4S8
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAjASB91QqkR
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD449Please respect copyright.PENANAbezwj2PVPq
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。449Please respect copyright.PENANAwy0IlzYHdK
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,449Please respect copyright.PENANAaH1iuoEEus
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAWDJGClueBd
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。449Please respect copyright.PENANAfcVNh44Ozn
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。449Please respect copyright.PENANAntJy2Dcnd9
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAhniszxdgYu
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。449Please respect copyright.PENANAnKCSwUrnFO
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAUhpQXWcUIE
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANA9lTy0CNKXK
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANA3vecCp3XS4
好啊。
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAHFqifLsZtA
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。449Please respect copyright.PENANAZ6fvD0itYg
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。449Please respect copyright.PENANANCic1SnEoL
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。449Please respect copyright.PENANAo9Q7wkkSYb
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAQVdiHlEaMf
好的,449Please respect copyright.PENANAatD6t8ZiVz
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、449Please respect copyright.PENANAUzRFyMamnO
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAXZVOHiFLne
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,449Please respect copyright.PENANApGReTINTJw
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAQxsL2zgYrp
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAwBHuMiwlib
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。449Please respect copyright.PENANAda6JoYgJiu
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料449Please respect copyright.PENANASZrIcEwwvN
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。449Please respect copyright.PENANAWYMF2vo3y7
比如:449Please respect copyright.PENANAjmAVIgqyJU
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。449Please respect copyright.PENANAVdnsDXZhOI
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。449Please respect copyright.PENANAy4wRmZBAZ6
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAT5KIE0L2dT
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANA6oY25XwqFv
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAwQwCpmcNEj
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANA3JZzX3wf7P
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係449Please respect copyright.PENANAxz406DuBKV
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANA7WPPhfZLRu
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAduMoiQbaEH
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,449Please respect copyright.PENANAWAI1pPFebd
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAFVqOM7fGxa
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANA5BBG5ZE311
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:449Please respect copyright.PENANAV4LOHiseDn
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。449Please respect copyright.PENANAheG12s6lmm
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAr50Bv6t5cN
哦~
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANABgQAiwlKDe
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:449Please respect copyright.PENANAkz2eVCYKvg
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)449Please respect copyright.PENANAh5DYAyl5tD
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)449Please respect copyright.PENANAeaGXEknyXj
的故事
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANA5ilLqH1vTd
好的、449Please respect copyright.PENANAQgGLmNCQkL
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANATuJ857tCYZ
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAt8BQYaoC2q
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANATUDSGxUHfX
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAD2AKALYFY1
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAmXONXBXd4Y
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAdzEW2PLUtR
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:449Please respect copyright.PENANAINBiPVayeP
1.『爭執』449Please respect copyright.PENANAo3N8rwMpJR
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』449Please respect copyright.PENANAOuxwCeG8ZP
3.『分手的情人(主角)』449Please respect copyright.PENANAyND1pd8V1b
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』449Please respect copyright.PENANAqrlcsSAIUB
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANA7o6AeoN362
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAewT0tYFPLC
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAnefum9gGWT
那如果加入復仇呢449Please respect copyright.PENANAEMwgOxyfhV
搶她大姐的未婚夫449Please respect copyright.PENANAnjoi7LGB4N
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANA5C2AW0L1Uk
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了449Please respect copyright.PENANAKMZ1bDBEKv
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……449Please respect copyright.PENANA2JMto5YnuR
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAIsgAcHtt2O
好的,了解啦
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAJi0LUkpnFZ
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAliuGrlVzwg
不一定要有吧~?449Please respect copyright.PENANAsjFppk9ulQ
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANASisl1qJQ6K
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAXN81S7qQFz
比如449Please respect copyright.PENANA1BP3tkOBgR
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』449Please respect copyright.PENANArQX8RMZvnD
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANArV85eyTbFh
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!449Please respect copyright.PENANACKf7XMiCBp
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD449Please respect copyright.PENANAxRO4grLQVd
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANApjTPPZ2cng
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 449Please respect copyright.PENANAdBGcb03Lj4
A君:449Please respect copyright.PENANAh6Y7DK4Cf5
你好厲害啊!449Please respect copyright.PENANAao1zsDFJ7Z
(重新把故事編排)449Please respect copyright.PENANAtsC1Nvk6qR
龍晨P:449Please respect copyright.PENANAd8N4lABONk
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~449Please respect copyright.PENANAJC5TlurNmx