A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANA9RwZoS8Hhn
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—437Please respect copyright.PENANAKRIP8dpXrZ
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAOhgBNMP7BP
你指標題?437Please respect copyright.PENANAPFUXX3Au6r
但有時訂標題也很困難~437Please respect copyright.PENANA96ccJUMtM8
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAFljG0tpK5n
嗯對啊,437Please respect copyright.PENANACkSIxBpdL9
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANACszxhv2ozO
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,437Please respect copyright.PENANAJMQsSlqtQl
所以沒有中心思想在。437Please respect copyright.PENANAkkRMINpTVi
我猜的對嗎?
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAICTx1KmbLJ
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。437Please respect copyright.PENANA07Xr9WYYye
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?437Please respect copyright.PENANAaz77xuDFv6
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANA7pWV6BNpuF
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!437Please respect copyright.PENANArvWYaHQicS
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAB2igQQSu5V
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANASHuPBc57P0
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD437Please respect copyright.PENANApxu3WdfGWg
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。437Please respect copyright.PENANAgEt1mpIVsg
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,437Please respect copyright.PENANAdtbptnaqW8
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANALuEFyk8aVh
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。437Please respect copyright.PENANARXYQmTym5B
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。437Please respect copyright.PENANA7mpFuAtMZm
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANA7MbQjR2XMQ
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。437Please respect copyright.PENANAPDPRYn9keH
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAZCplZIqu6m
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANA6zgzjqXh0z
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAHXrCSJuCSW
好啊。
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAPxsdchAppp
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。437Please respect copyright.PENANA9QmXlF5uuq
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。437Please respect copyright.PENANAwWzFzSKjMI
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。437Please respect copyright.PENANAN7CuinVDf4
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAoD4WgREEhk
好的,437Please respect copyright.PENANAaNorj4pNNo
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、437Please respect copyright.PENANA77KOhGzgOf
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAgiAv921Is5
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,437Please respect copyright.PENANAWXlur1eTdJ
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAd32QJW1m1h
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANA3aNIRTj3xL
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。437Please respect copyright.PENANAHEADIucSbh
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料437Please respect copyright.PENANATrgraAFjV2
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。437Please respect copyright.PENANAZ5wV8zpshC
比如:437Please respect copyright.PENANAr06jwlQ2b4
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。437Please respect copyright.PENANAMgHy5LGIYW
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。437Please respect copyright.PENANAqds1YB8gOt
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAIK6rtojUqb
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAaUkdIzcqq6
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAwPqBVTyeb1
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAeCG1GZR7Tp
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係437Please respect copyright.PENANAV2JmM0jXXY
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAT2RFWSqton
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAfcXLMheZaf
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,437Please respect copyright.PENANAKtyNyrTpUs
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAAWnob7JZqo
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANA3sRPMa7bmP
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:437Please respect copyright.PENANAg1FdZiumUj
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。437Please respect copyright.PENANApzeIuVXpIP
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAJ7X9l4uUQ7
哦~
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANATyECqYFD05
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:437Please respect copyright.PENANAS90pmsJVgV
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)437Please respect copyright.PENANAIAUNwGmZ6X
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)437Please respect copyright.PENANAFDbZzyFVNG
的故事
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAR2WqPWAyV1
好的、437Please respect copyright.PENANAZM09Gi2m7f
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAHWQJluw6WT
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAuF7T7CDwbq
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAADIkoWnwDF
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAE89HNuI9z9
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANACwVGFjz9DZ
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAuDbh5xY9kb
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:437Please respect copyright.PENANAaaOwy9yjIh
1.『爭執』437Please respect copyright.PENANAv3eJRqRiWN
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』437Please respect copyright.PENANAVI80uEFZud
3.『分手的情人(主角)』437Please respect copyright.PENANAMwCVtkwBHn
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』437Please respect copyright.PENANAxSEEu0DuAG
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAB6uikIIPxn
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAGF3MY6r9va
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANACJTAsI93yU
那如果加入復仇呢437Please respect copyright.PENANApQ68BTCAhH
搶她大姐的未婚夫437Please respect copyright.PENANAAFV06n0Zux
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANABzJ21VS7uM
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了437Please respect copyright.PENANA95Gck7U0Xy
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……437Please respect copyright.PENANAlpWFFwGk3K
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANA5NXz6Cefgh
好的,了解啦
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANASvmI7LohHp
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANA2mKGOUVwfB
不一定要有吧~?437Please respect copyright.PENANAnRogUWyQjj
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANA3KRl20tftv
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANA4XVv2g5DUO
比如437Please respect copyright.PENANAPWUCabkB8e
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』437Please respect copyright.PENANAwJoPdc1w7G
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAHVsTHNy6vR
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!437Please respect copyright.PENANAcwtnWsyzS1
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD437Please respect copyright.PENANAQPKavzBxAI
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAnHJV1DAe7s
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 437Please respect copyright.PENANAsTyxkCYOay
A君:437Please respect copyright.PENANAuMWtO6Lu0W
你好厲害啊!437Please respect copyright.PENANAtR4iWV50BN
(重新把故事編排)437Please respect copyright.PENANAQyx6W91VkP
龍晨P:437Please respect copyright.PENANAmcuH0X5mQI
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~437Please respect copyright.PENANAW6gdFnIB32