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Seven friends, ALEN JACKY, ROBERT , JACK, Rose, Sonia and Maggie , reunite in a local pub after several years apart to celebrate the farewell of JACK, who is going abroad. They learn about an abandoned hotel that is reportedly haunted. It had originally been a mental asylum for the criminally insane, but was almost completely destroyed in a fire. The origin of the fire has never been fully explained. After years of neglect, the ruins were refurbished into a five star hotel by a builder. The hotel was unsuccessful due to strange happenings that drove the owner to suicide. Rumors state that he was pushed into suicide by the ghost of an asylum inmate.
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All of them treat it seriously, except Maggie and ALEN. They say that they wouldn't believe something they haven't seen. A worker at the bar says, that "...you would not be alive to believe once you see it". ALEN suggests that the group explore the abandoned building.
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They try to enter the hotel from the main door, but cannot, so enter by the back door. Rose observes strange things, but JACK brushes her claims aside. They find a TV set on with no transmission or power. Both ROBERT and JACK hear the sounds, "WELCOME". Ignoring it as a hallucination, they proceed to room 3046, a notorious room.
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There, ALEN is killed. The group flees in panic and come to realize that they are trapped inside the hotel with no way out. ROBERT and JACKY go to the terrace to try and find the network. There, JACKY is killed by ghost spirits.
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The group starts being terrorized by a ghostly woman. Sonia is dragged into the darkness by the ghost. With three people dead, the remaining four find an abandoned jeep which they use to try to get out of the hotel, amid ghostly apparitions. After a tiring drive through misty areas, the group escape, only to find that they are back at the door of room 3046. They realize that the only way to escape is to survive until dawn.
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Soon they are confronted by Sonia, whom ROBERT and JACK think is the ghost, but a tearful Sonia tells them that it is really her. The group learns that, when the hotel was a mental asylum, a possessed girl named Marina was admitted after she murdered her entire family. Marina would always claim to have 'married the devil', and would become very violent at the hospital, even killing the doctors. The fire that broke out killed all the inmates. The group realize that it is Marina who is terrorizing them.
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Sonia tries to contact Marina to find what she wants. She gets a call from Marina, saying that the spirit wants to kill them all, nothing else. The terrified group then discover that Sonia is actually dead and Marina is speaking through her. Rose asks the time from JACK, only to be told that it is the ALENe time (3:55 AM) she had seen on the clock in one of the rooms shortly after entering the hotel. Believing it is some kind of intuition, they decide to go back to the ALENe room to understand Rose's extrasensory perception.
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There they find a book containing paranormal explanations and a way to locate an energy source of dark spirits. With the help of incantations from the book, they have visions of the past. They see that the hotel was a mental asylum and find that the energy source of the dark spirit is in a shock machine. They decide to burn it down to end the horror.
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JACK and Maggie go to kitchen in search of something flammable. Maggie sees a female spirit sitting on chair and reading newspaper. When she reaches towards her, JACK again brushes her aside. Maggie is killed by Marina who appears in the form of JACK. ROBERT is beheaded by the spirit, leaving only JACK and Rose alive.
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JACK tries to burn the machine, but is pulled by the spirit into a closet. The spirit starts terrorizing Rose. Rose starts a fire. Amidst ghostly apparitions and obstructions, and with the help of the spirit of JOFFER), she manages to burn the machine down. This results in the destruction of Marina's spirit. The film ends with the entrance doors of the hotel opening at dawn and a traumatized Rose, being the only survivor, walking outside.
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