In the words of M. Williams
M. Williams
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I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 527Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY1bSKzFQAP
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.527Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoDDPFFK5k1
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.527Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbtC9umbDhR
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!527Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDEOx6pwue1
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!527Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqPC3KMlelP
Well done, Zak!
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