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M. Williams
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I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 542Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBpvP53Ndci
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.542Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ67ofHTbXV6
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.542Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNu0dYpZH1L
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!542Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI5bV0BlCbK
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!542Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw6qqdFq1DK
Well done, Zak!
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