In the words of M. Williams
M. Williams
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I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrsUrO3JVvN
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ40SA6EcmZb
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgF01T64bcN
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn3ub4gjeKU
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!520Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpJFjzsJc8e
Well done, Zak!
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