作者妳好711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9o7nmUqCET
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稍微看了下这本佩姬711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSWhXAhseXm
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYeuWbIt2cY
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡATZfCENYNG
现世一堆东西711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsahcbOalOe
其实就很简单一个道理711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4esef56n8q
主角想要被爱711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPqtKj7sm0C
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgE5xLCHfKj
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主角就爱回去711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtQgDvNvasv
女主伊莎爱711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI6aXWz6wN4
主角就爱回去711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2x6kJNQNMi
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ76PDWaE6sH
想要被爱是佩姬的主题711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIxor2YZykz
主角性别不是问题711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD4kfqx7fCT
内心冲突不是问题711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ8FMUeJb1i
主角被爱就迎刃而解711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0a7T3ec71h
看不懂这点整部书就看不了711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ565IodKARt
妳的书乏人问津是这道理711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSFmmOKI9Mb
作者妳说主角口是心非711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw12vc5Lvfs
欸我说这不对711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2DvJcbRdly
这明摆着口非心也非711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHPreSgurv7
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT9n8JGMgrR
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiHsuiZHQyr
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzDU2TqdWfQ
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ02X64T9fz
为了被爱711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOyNsRC6dOg
连原本的性别都不要了711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL0XEg6AYzF
这主角疯的傻的711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0UN6bFIfEn
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpnqnPqYNrp
女主伊莎711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbtt9L5bRD8
单纯的色鬼711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8LfstaRdjQ
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQlosqRiPSi
黑化可能
艾德兰711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwAEYS3fx67
可怜虫阿711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfVnK9uU10Z
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAqeTwZyzaJ
妳说解释不够711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡom9lYy7w9w
我到觉得清楚711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHaRJgUutbo
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHBMg7IKikz
他为啥强711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8KcvWs2aJe
妳啥都没讲711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG9Azxk1XE4
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHsgYWjKjTy
也是除主角外最明白的角色711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ27A4vel3v
她就拿来爱主角的711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfMJjLRCInn
功能性角色
还有其他许多711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvaxGizisrE
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTggdhtx3oJ
可以瞧见妳的苦心711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUEQc2uGNej
我觉得这没必要711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMmEBnFjbUp
好的台词提一次够了711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8CvIWptuVC
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIxWteC4op7
我倒嫌设定囉嗦711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR3GKO4lHBz
空白很重要711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfMWlLcVX9C
没明白有没明白的好处711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr2QxpCoq0L
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM4SJRI37Ed
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF91xXEUX5s
我还会继续看的711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiAOQvMYzos
确实好看711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2PIt2uEPZ9
希望你这能写完711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1RIPitxelt
能放上起点不711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3rP9zn2TOk
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQAVS3Q6miF
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡASgIeXxXG0
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGECtPiUKP0
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD2unqPa6MD
感謝你的評文711Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhBaTXGC5kF
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