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可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv7VO2cWsRW
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黑化可能
艾德兰699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHA3PEjdiKm
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我到觉得清楚699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe8CWvGENVp
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDZXA5ChiYw
他为啥强699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUej5YJYX6f
妳啥都没讲699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlppHWiTz6g
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp2Yiqd12hM
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她就拿来爱主角的699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVqV1IQcehu
功能性角色
还有其他许多699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXuOMDkiG1r
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqbgS8cQaqn
可以瞧见妳的苦心699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2KSDvTobNI
我觉得这没必要699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRNq6VG73mD
好的台词提一次够了699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpl3wZ8kNCw
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQLgB1Ig8A8
我倒嫌设定囉嗦699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQbLHxCpTNW
空白很重要699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBZ1O2Iiw39
没明白有没明白的好处699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnUnJcLaOeg
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvw1S7momiW
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm7XPhDl50A
我还会继续看的699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt14BEZWscV
确实好看699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUBWwFvFOOP
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能放上起点不699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR2Uiz9ZHiW
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa6bcvW9nsV
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7cHalj6mMs
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZJDyqzV6nj
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞699Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAaE5Yfxms1
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