作者妳好620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlzrIoaXAfD
受到妳的邀请620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOzUpWXaimc
稍微看了下这本佩姬620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡASEIxGhL2R
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyDFnzGDWqu
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgTehtZSlsm
现世一堆东西620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1eVCFt7ULZ
其实就很简单一个道理620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcmwBz83i10
主角想要被爱620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaMevWupH56
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqaLlAkkfdI
男主卢克爱620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQjXw4gAI4b
主角就爱回去620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuXmHmW7FsE
女主伊莎爱620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIxzIWCjSLo
主角就爱回去620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiytvD2H0tE
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB8EF8lJte8
想要被爱是佩姬的主题620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpzH214CBZF
主角性别不是问题620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoLazSIAOw2
内心冲突不是问题620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7OEg9kEdiV
主角被爱就迎刃而解620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvIwYrOid3W
看不懂这点整部书就看不了620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡash5fd4pj1
妳的书乏人问津是这道理620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbn4jdt17ts
作者妳说主角口是心非620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1rIe8RkjA0
欸我说这不对620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSPoPHLF8Y5
这明摆着口非心也非620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfsgtZ4foYM
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS5kC88SO3d
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0IZ8oGDWxk
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeUSlz0UDxU
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2aM2U6ih7M
为了被爱620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcTGDFA0zMY
连原本的性别都不要了620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz6jGMrtlxU
这主角疯的傻的620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡitt1urCLkk
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcmJXJXhWLc
女主伊莎620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU7i3ikC1re
单纯的色鬼620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsnH95zstiL
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp3KOIK7aV5
黑化可能
艾德兰620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8QFXOKDWkp
可怜虫阿620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjAh2HXK6zK
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjVYRsOOXRd
妳说解释不够620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcgaH4FXWvW
我到觉得清楚620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ47UdUjVaUW
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrvvTapin40
他为啥强620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNFJ4MBna5P
妳啥都没讲620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5Q6qkDMdYJ
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFEAD7dAGWN
也是除主角外最明白的角色620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZRynKxnbyO
她就拿来爱主角的620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv69wpmkINY
功能性角色
还有其他许多620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlkoDrqrMIQ
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo28UDX8mos
可以瞧见妳的苦心620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2BYQ5cJYFh
我觉得这没必要620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcUVOtRMQDd
好的台词提一次够了620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSPGwwi2WTe
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGzLXF6OY4t
我倒嫌设定囉嗦620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd6ZEHl6hP2
空白很重要620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk2JPbmwQRL
没明白有没明白的好处620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjaY655dB4R
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb42AzjxDOk
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEHd0KmFU7S
我还会继续看的620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1bXwXZQL70
确实好看620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1FrtD7cxry
希望你这能写完620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡruf3EYNg7F
能放上起点不620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAYFWr5EL5H
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZhoE8a6JPC
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrHDsCMISSI
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7r04mYpJPa
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz11gVQPoGq
感謝你的評文620Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR6IgRHDV8W
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