作者妳好668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNWUqwruDDR
受到妳的邀请668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQh6b3YVOg9
稍微看了下这本佩姬668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo5gn6yDqwE
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUyJiCAWVBx
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5D8iPJd17s
现世一堆东西668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfrJe8usi9l
其实就很简单一个道理668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL0IFUyYD1Q
主角想要被爱668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbIRI2N5kGj
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVL7sNVgxaV
男主卢克爱668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSgB1WJ7Jzm
主角就爱回去668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv6KuMVzHYG
女主伊莎爱668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwkC7a0hUNR
主角就爱回去668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFTmiVFFen0
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAUTpC5fe4r
想要被爱是佩姬的主题668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWDES5bzhDM
主角性别不是问题668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKWnImxz6qb
内心冲突不是问题668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEZrSMiwIfW
主角被爱就迎刃而解668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKTL9mdQcXS
看不懂这点整部书就看不了668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv35SlFnryn
妳的书乏人问津是这道理668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEBBa5osAkC
作者妳说主角口是心非668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLJsEvHTiju
欸我说这不对668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpZTVdEt9NU
这明摆着口非心也非668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfUwa4WevbM
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVmCu4oIJsW
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxy4nqK6gOE
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfOZDUujFWt
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL7xpM98W2l
为了被爱668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvCyBWyvDBa
连原本的性别都不要了668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8JtzjiH7tl
这主角疯的傻的668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJuTs99sclc
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxPYFgcLyQW
女主伊莎668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy6TU5eC7D7
单纯的色鬼668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlsgdCvAJIF
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEzbCQNvLkn
黑化可能
艾德兰668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡelpzbKafeM
可怜虫阿668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡewfVitwclF
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz50DgtlnD2
妳说解释不够668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9tuMoOkquK
我到觉得清楚668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd2wVvZPOrR
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdDcE1tplEo
他为啥强668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa6oMWm2IzS
妳啥都没讲668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2GavFUUUCa
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVm6RsdQeQr
也是除主角外最明白的角色668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBPvgU7Dhrw
她就拿来爱主角的668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyBtqf49Lq8
功能性角色
还有其他许多668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLWJ9CVhJO1
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4QKkRGMkzu
可以瞧见妳的苦心668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZKvXFx1w9t
我觉得这没必要668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvd6hCQepHF
好的台词提一次够了668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuyEOReVycD
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoK3yzzhoFy
我倒嫌设定囉嗦668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVDeijHWCF1
空白很重要668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTGQxtrRSA7
没明白有没明白的好处668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOsk0r0woUO
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcSXdD13Ilx
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnteA4vIZJU
我还会继续看的668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmB4F24fjGH
确实好看668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2SVvX9ALdf
希望你这能写完668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVpOAU2wdTf
能放上起点不668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtti2T0cLl9
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYWrWZgiIxf
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡurTLS7nOqN
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDFwLEmHapc
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9H97jro76Y
感謝你的評文668Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLcicfue4WE
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