作者妳好712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbosM3JEsJg
受到妳的邀请712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTk6FITrJ64
稍微看了下这本佩姬712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwfOHpgNL18
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXTmx4rTIlv
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhF0rR4eS73
现世一堆东西712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLUahh0VDtF
其实就很简单一个道理712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡapAocnJ4YY
主角想要被爱712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPDoX3zFfN8
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqjFfsQn3yt
男主卢克爱712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP0CeYrNZZj
主角就爱回去712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK6voD6fLpc
女主伊莎爱712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡteL12oENmL
主角就爱回去712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfum6RYxya9
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtcgKvJR0a3
想要被爱是佩姬的主题712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4BKYz3r0Yq
主角性别不是问题712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeIEoShqLOE
内心冲突不是问题712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcGQr3XrEq2
主角被爱就迎刃而解712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH8aMhdiJ6T
看不懂这点整部书就看不了712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuWOoz9JshA
妳的书乏人问津是这道理712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbKCLrUgt6w
作者妳说主角口是心非712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTndawFngIV
欸我说这不对712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWgscDVH8Kd
这明摆着口非心也非712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR2uzOeg1Y5
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhoWLosXqOc
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRNZnyB8bf9
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnDeBO17Mve
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKe3psAY0T3
为了被爱712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMlyBK4u4Zv
连原本的性别都不要了712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJKO7GmaGfL
这主角疯的傻的712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡekhYSMfHiO
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUn16rwpEtX
女主伊莎712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvUFt5aXBYm
单纯的色鬼712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3zPLrKxzPn
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjaHqsa93gm
黑化可能
艾德兰712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSPjaS1MCda
可怜虫阿712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYVVxhGAJHZ
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyOHS39b2Nl
妳说解释不够712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxN4Yu3ZiQE
我到觉得清楚712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoXiGj2Y0Po
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYyOBqOpyef
他为啥强712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxuFcIxaDz1
妳啥都没讲712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpsxRbz3mOF
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZpBvyNL6Km
也是除主角外最明白的角色712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCnnK7KUKBm
她就拿来爱主角的712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtlyHwK2S8A
功能性角色
还有其他许多712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcWaXOJS92R
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDEZpyrQNMG
可以瞧见妳的苦心712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDWebUI8ayr
我觉得这没必要712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkDukJFCaKZ
好的台词提一次够了712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfC21ih4ijc
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4WP0TP42kl
我倒嫌设定囉嗦712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF44yTpT8I1
空白很重要712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ4fVfHG8e0
没明白有没明白的好处712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVmocanNsHj
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwKThL8EguF
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTV3owATGkf
我还会继续看的712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHobYzRIrzD
确实好看712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDKFA7B9uNi
希望你这能写完712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ6uNYwLiKA
能放上起点不712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8L7gZE48HF
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiFTjDjL5zk
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkPjqEneI4N
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVKh4QxDPfP
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmxV54Jkn0l
感謝你的評文712Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwiblIxT1vN
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