作者妳好689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXZ6gzrEeNG
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稍微看了下这本佩姬689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAc41bOLrRA
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡplcFqssPvy
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJAggMndQEs
现世一堆东西689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡndVwB7Lisn
其实就很简单一个道理689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNS6JiSiYkb
主角想要被爱689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ35bRkDsv5S
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAFGiPWPoM1
男主卢克爱689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQuN6zhwOc5
主角就爱回去689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwGP1Wsbyin
女主伊莎爱689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuUd3YrcCLk
主角就爱回去689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx5XYNA17zr
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtjI74Knfwv
想要被爱是佩姬的主题689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2pLmueoyBb
主角性别不是问题689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDXii42yk5U
内心冲突不是问题689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmEnKI3Dm0Y
主角被爱就迎刃而解689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEaPyPN9fkc
看不懂这点整部书就看不了689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWlg4ZPAIFE
妳的书乏人问津是这道理689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡezUaRA7MDZ
作者妳说主角口是心非689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzlXImHEvVd
欸我说这不对689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQYmKyHA2tn
这明摆着口非心也非689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgN9Dbx8JnU
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAL4Yya0UlI
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGwwMzJiQir
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvixnWI8VZG
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVFHIQQQbNL
为了被爱689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1IJSVF6tic
连原本的性别都不要了689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdn9BcBspMb
这主角疯的傻的689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEiZ1DFxg6a
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiEwhskvCRV
女主伊莎689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhQjEVAGfrh
单纯的色鬼689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡomP2wCkRFp
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡieaOULkHQe
黑化可能
艾德兰689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv0sDNTjdIn
可怜虫阿689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1oSmIm84if
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEiB35KAs00
妳说解释不够689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk656ZLUmcE
我到觉得清楚689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTuvMolSEyv
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy0WuaRrJ7c
他为啥强689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpnRlo8TD5J
妳啥都没讲689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjEyJjqinST
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrD4jG4BAFB
也是除主角外最明白的角色689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1W1eBJONkY
她就拿来爱主角的689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡObtfMw887p
功能性角色
还有其他许多689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCpkDEeceLD
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzYXcZiYlnG
可以瞧见妳的苦心689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgFWiPEisSn
我觉得这没必要689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGTdSaQ2KZa
好的台词提一次够了689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaq9eiFyZ0W
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpLjA583ogy
我倒嫌设定囉嗦689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBLNPbvX8g9
空白很重要689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvmwg2YlNOS
没明白有没明白的好处689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9ItaSEN4jh
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡago1hDpJqO
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu5rA3sR7vO
我还会继续看的689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOyxfrDYT1F
确实好看689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUt8PJiOAA1
希望你这能写完689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ4dgfpZYSd
能放上起点不689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwb3CA7FUOw
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlakgbjVaoo
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT5T9dPzwZp
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS6wqoGynhw
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡndXmpvHewz
感謝你的評文689Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHxInNSGz0X
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