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念念難忘。
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曉夢纏綿語,依偎點淚姿。33Please respect copyright.PENANA0rbb5hG4XP
撥霧倚窗癡,雨霏愁更斷,化相思。
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南歌子在宋朝是很流行的詞,因此變化相當多元,最少有七種變體。33Please respect copyright.PENANA7Usn1JHpCJ
這闕用的是單調二十三字,最重要的是最後一句三字,如同「詞眼」,代表了整闕詞的靈魂。我在「化相思」跟「念相思」左思右想,最終還是決定用「化相思」,讀起來比較有戲劇性。
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仄仄平平仄。句33Please respect copyright.PENANARqXtsl58Zr
平平仄仄平。韻33Please respect copyright.PENANAkp2ooOrVtP
平仄仄平平。韻33Please respect copyright.PENANA71Vl7H6ZHI
仄平平仄仄。句33Please respect copyright.PENANA5n76Y3SEiO
仄平平。韻