日本最近是梅雨季,如果不開除濕機,室內都很陰濕難受。趁著這個機會寫了一個小品,順便練習填詞。97Please respect copyright.PENANAP9Vw33ZQgF
不得不說,歷經絕句的平仄洗禮之後,宋詞的平仄式樣比較自由一些,寫起來也比較不綁手綁腳,挺有趣的。
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梅雨日,陰冷意闌姍。蛙叫蟲鳴連數句,喧囂騰鬧甚娛歡,浮世更知禪。
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此闕是《憶江南》正格調,平仄如下,歡迎有興趣的朋友也玩看看!
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●仄仄平平。韻97Please respect copyright.PENANAyTHIbsOJLR
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●表自由,平仄皆可。97Please respect copyright.PENANAYxUm1lB8m9
最後的句指非韻字,韻表押韻字。
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