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《電車》437Please respect copyright.PENANAHV6O1J63Li
在這方空間內,時間流動速度如轉動中的摩天輪。437Please respect copyright.PENANA8e6pNlclRB
車廂內站著的人們擠得像沙丁魚,坐著的人們也瑟縮著,凜冽的寒風刮著車身,刮著人們的頭髮,刮著人們的耳後。437Please respect copyright.PENANAZKCOGhb21k
當中一個少女用手機傳送著短訊,陽光照得她柔軟的髮絲烏亮了起來,長髮掩了她的小耳。437Please respect copyright.PENANAcsJBN2D06I
上面的木屑如沙粒滴下,落在乘客厚重的衣服上。437Please respect copyright.PENANAE9S60340Nw
須臾,碎屑愈來愈密。突然傳來一聲震耳欲聾的巨響。上層的部分辟里啪拉的坍塌下來。437Please respect copyright.PENANAzHbmPxBZGW
「叮……叮……」的聲音靜止了,世界靜默了。437Please respect copyright.PENANAUFq0RylLBm
鮮血染了車廂,飄揚了腥甜。437Please respect copyright.PENANALyZXuRMORZ
人們淒厲的哀號,驚異的餘悸,急遽的心跳,費力地呼吸著,爭取漸稀薄的空氣。437Please respect copyright.PENANAtLJ3ZyhPHj
少女的半張臉綻放瑰紅色的薔薇,在電車的上層崩塌的一瞬間,她的瞳瞥我一眼,她的幼臂伸向我。437Please respect copyright.PENANAFi77OTXS1H
可是,她抓不著我。437Please respect copyright.PENANAateVV27zLd
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