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在這方空間內,時間流動速度如轉動中的摩天輪。400Please respect copyright.PENANAAXyp0jQiOk
車廂內站著的人們擠得像沙丁魚,坐著的人們也瑟縮著,凜冽的寒風刮著車身,刮著人們的頭髮,刮著人們的耳後。400Please respect copyright.PENANAUr4cr5YxgW
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上面的木屑如沙粒滴下,落在乘客厚重的衣服上。400Please respect copyright.PENANAKIneEugmM7
須臾,碎屑愈來愈密。突然傳來一聲震耳欲聾的巨響。上層的部分辟里啪拉的坍塌下來。400Please respect copyright.PENANAKMewaOGM0m
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鮮血染了車廂,飄揚了腥甜。400Please respect copyright.PENANA5zKXSoj7Xa
人們淒厲的哀號,驚異的餘悸,急遽的心跳,費力地呼吸著,爭取漸稀薄的空氣。400Please respect copyright.PENANA3uKwLoGLDA
少女的半張臉綻放瑰紅色的薔薇,在電車的上層崩塌的一瞬間,她的瞳瞥我一眼,她的幼臂伸向我。400Please respect copyright.PENANAbhzI5WJP7I
可是,她抓不著我。400Please respect copyright.PENANAWT3F1C2MrA
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