《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvmQniRhDbf
詩意要較為薄弱81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4So075l3eh
但仍是一首很棒的古詩81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡezCFEwof1s
-81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFCCWWTJv3e
之所以我認為相對較弱的部分81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmqqE6GWfIY
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPluG62h50F
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題，但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景，望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzSZvDAd026
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防，思念太深。81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEy8FpWVzPX
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿，景色太美。81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNaw0OHxsmt
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後，重回到了【夏祈杳杳】，別有另外一種，希望來年梧桐花開，伊人會再來的期望。81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn30Iy81sK4
更多是抱持著，能夠等待，並且那人是可以等得到的感受。81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEf3r9sJeoB
故此，以其作為比較下，兩者意境高低立判。81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ8qpc6BmgV
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當然，宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手，皆為佳作。81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDaJDezJkrp
詩的優缺，僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ41MNUVxBNp
每個人的角度皆為不同。81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoLqiNI1l4q
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有人感受深刻，81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVLGMUHLyxF
有人無感，81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTzPTtfF7LE
各有差異。81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5q5PZ13PBW
而我僅是那茫茫人海中，81Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ5KFeny2su
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。
