《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧102Please respect copyright.PENANA3qDURjVDLh
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍102Please respect copyright.PENANAfHAtZtbax5
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)102Please respect copyright.PENANAO960QvKvOh
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單102Please respect copyright.PENANAuqT5rzpTQF
而是是人在食用時能入口即化102Please respect copyright.PENANAizo6YcuVCJ
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」102Please respect copyright.PENANALURtlrxfWd
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久102Please respect copyright.PENANAV6Rmk41SGF
使人不會因為時間的洪流102Please respect copyright.PENANA5HWbUNZVaq
失去了炙熱102Please respect copyright.PENANAzqJ1uLIq9I
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》102Please respect copyright.PENANAHhiVDmd931
但夏季怎麼會有雪102Please respect copyright.PENANA9xbybqe5BZ
令人加以反思102Please respect copyright.PENANAzdkKzz4yJ1
雪季不該有的畫面102Please respect copyright.PENANAdxRBaYixyU
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏102Please respect copyright.PENANAhmlqOB20GO
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或許102Please respect copyright.PENANA0pPUVAc674
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣102Please respect copyright.PENANACykYHWPHK6
即便是來年102Please respect copyright.PENANApYvrubA4YA
之後的每一年都依然如此