《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧133Please respect copyright.PENANAbsUnMKNVbL
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍133Please respect copyright.PENANA9bKlqbk6xv
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)133Please respect copyright.PENANAO7BPAkTKse
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單133Please respect copyright.PENANAC1Bi4lyQCJ
而是是人在食用時能入口即化133Please respect copyright.PENANAG26vgSeEAy
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」133Please respect copyright.PENANAocBexTteu4
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久133Please respect copyright.PENANAiLV9KfvywL
使人不會因為時間的洪流133Please respect copyright.PENANA3wa4mCYmPn
失去了炙熱133Please respect copyright.PENANA2ZY2JI4doW
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》133Please respect copyright.PENANAlGOonMlhS4
但夏季怎麼會有雪133Please respect copyright.PENANAcGqXvY08zD
令人加以反思133Please respect copyright.PENANAacSHPd5Bkc
雪季不該有的畫面133Please respect copyright.PENANADGCLIe5QHb
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏133Please respect copyright.PENANAIqZi85NQff
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或許133Please respect copyright.PENANA23aQjyEvz9
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣133Please respect copyright.PENANAAF6itWqYWA
即便是來年133Please respect copyright.PENANA6FvfE7x95t
之後的每一年都依然如此