《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧112Please respect copyright.PENANAZkC9SsrCwQ
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍112Please respect copyright.PENANALdkB6tKVXz
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)112Please respect copyright.PENANAPx1hQvhBHJ
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單112Please respect copyright.PENANAIkKQVvZCvR
而是是人在食用時能入口即化112Please respect copyright.PENANAliP26Fe1gN
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」112Please respect copyright.PENANAQ7FuWwn3Rl
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久112Please respect copyright.PENANA0ONrPKYBti
使人不會因為時間的洪流112Please respect copyright.PENANAu78uwQx9JI
失去了炙熱112Please respect copyright.PENANAhPdtl82HgY
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》112Please respect copyright.PENANAlmJA4ZKXZM
但夏季怎麼會有雪112Please respect copyright.PENANAeWvZl9CBP3
令人加以反思112Please respect copyright.PENANA8eIBzKfMtj
雪季不該有的畫面112Please respect copyright.PENANAfvYSOq5Usw
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏112Please respect copyright.PENANA5o5FciIrdG
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或許112Please respect copyright.PENANAEsfP0BBe1W
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣112Please respect copyright.PENANAA0A34kqz22
即便是來年112Please respect copyright.PENANAvvHF1U07tY
之後的每一年都依然如此