《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU4NSpQ1vmw
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkVOgv7O6eY
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgi934rAuup
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡisCJZ3Hsq3
而是是人在食用時能入口即化103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPidnim5aU2
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUwAffyeWUN
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7M1iLYpWET
使人不會因為時間的洪流103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUZ15pDDYVJ
失去了炙熱103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNctC8EhmWi
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPDztuhPwMq
但夏季怎麼會有雪103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQuMtJjBhGg
令人加以反思103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡccti3bolst
雪季不該有的畫面103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM3hqY3jnFx
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT4A5GmveAx
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或許103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgYQFrNgBLI
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRHYxTtf0U7
即便是來年103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡptIPti0jTg
之後的每一年都依然如此
