終完修正完第一章。改動的地方如下:
角色改名474Please respect copyright.PENANAL0edIdW1p6
除了玄牛之外,所有畜牲集團的戰士都重新命名,因為那些陳生、李生、等等的命名,亂來之餘,又不符合作品性格。所以有以下改動:
何大力->南昌一絕474Please respect copyright.PENANAgxoqx54alm
劉元山->海柏474Please respect copyright.PENANAtRINh2m6Ck
陳生->曉尚474Please respect copyright.PENANAPJARkIjM7v
李生->曉珀474Please respect copyright.PENANA6dYVMVuJrH
嚴生->迎豐474Please respect copyright.PENANA6cUPRHTe5A
史生->富薈474Please respect copyright.PENANAjdyrQTCMlN
林生->傲形474Please respect copyright.PENANA2VYJKt3FKU
黃生->利奧474Please respect copyright.PENANAooxpWGQByU
張生->曉岸
執文法474Please respect copyright.PENANAisQbUj3cGK
也許是小弟進步了,現在回看第一章,文法竟是那麼糟糕,是以也大幅修正。474Please respect copyright.PENANAbySWKfcufs