Ok. Wow. This competition was an adventure. From psyco scientists, to freaky video games, to cannibalistic humans (still gives me the creeps), to a twist of Jack and the Beanstalk, to a tenacle monsters, to haunted castles, to haunted houses- just wow! Everyone should be so proud of themselves.
There was a little change in the judging, since my brother didn't have time to judge the entries, so I just took his place. As was said in the intro, 7 for first, 5 for second, and 3 for third favorite. (My sister and I handing out our own favorites points.) Plus 5 points for grammar and 5 points for writing structure.
So here it is-
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#1) The lab - SomethingSomethingSomethi
Oooo. Ok. This was quite interesting. It had me thinking about it for nights afterwards. So, this was a little scarier than what I wanted my sister to read, so I automatically gave you two points from her. Good job, Something!
Grammar - 5
Writing - 3303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9DjDwjauTS
Sis points - 2
My points - 3
OVERALL - 13
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#2) THE FORBIDDEN CONSOLE - FR33FA11
Wow! I loved this one. It was definity the shortest, but it brought back much nostalgia from the scary stories books I used to read as a kid. Awesome work, Free!
Grammar - 5
Writing - 4
Sis points - 0
My points - 0
OVERALL - 9
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#3.) Livestock - Bengonto
Where to begin.... where to begin. Yup. Wow. That's the only word I have to describe this. Just wow. As the same with The Lab, there was NO WAY I was reading this to my sister, so I automatically gave you 2 points from her. Interesting writing, Ben!303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoD2jo8guP1
Grammar- 3
Writing - 4303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyt1Y4gpfCA
Sis points - 2
My points - 0
OVERALL - 9
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#4) Bread N' Bones - Saurna303Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQy0QL4xwUe
Alright. Did not expect that. I loved it! Such a twist! I will never read the Jack and the Beanstalk story the same again! Thank so much, Saur!
Grammar - 5
Writing - 4
Sis points - 0
My points - 0
OVERALL - 9
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#5) Tentacle Lake - Julia Hope
Man! This was sooo good! I loved it! It was intriguing and the descriptions were divine! Awesome work, Jules!
Grammar - 5
Writing - 5
Sis points - 3
My points- 7
OVERALL - 20
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#6) The Castle - Phoenix_Wolf
Ok. This was just plain awesome! Pure awesomeness! You used great descriptions and action to bring this wonderful story together. I loved it, Phoe!
Grammar - 3
Writing - 4
Sis points - 7
My points - 5
OVERALL - 19
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#7) Fear(less) - FR33FA11
Look here! We got another one by FR33FA11!! And boy, is it a good one! I liked how you took their friendship to create the dare and the adventure. Well done, Free!
Grammar - 5
Writing - 4
Sis points - 5
My points - 0
OVERALL - 14
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Well, there you go. Even if you didn't score high, you did amazing! Everyone here totally rocked it!! Have a fun Halloween!!!!
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