Hello, everyone!! Thank you so much for entering this contest. I was blown away by all of your entries; they were amazing! The violence, the romance, the emotion! You all certainly made my Tuesday morning.281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBs2YYkTQ1J
As I did with my previous contest, I’m going to be adding comments to each submission.281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsMEPuege5R
Grammar: 5 points281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQB0aFf8YCL
Creativity: 10 points281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcvh0qbK2oy
Emotion: 5 points281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvsQE2Wvmhw
Complying with the rules: 5 points
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#1: “Its better to fall(inspired by All Summer in a Day)” by SomethingSomethingSomethi281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlHo4nc1jCL
This would’ve also been an amazing entry for my Perfect contest! I love it so much. I haven’t read All Summer in a Day yet (if you’re talking about the book), but now I must! You have a creative way with words, and thank you for entering!281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN98539EZdx
Total: 20.5 pts
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#2: “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgSqKRwqTMv
I can’t be the only one who just adores the line, “I looked up at him, willing myself not to get lost in his eyes like I did five years ago." I love how you put two perspectives in this story as well! Thank you so much for entering!281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRuVOElQ7oT
Total: 19 pts
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#3: “For Becky” by Bluemoon Scriptor281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbbiQuul14B
I have no words, Bluemoon Scriptor. I need this to be a novel. Hell, a movie too. The way you describe things is…again, I have no words.
The plot twist at the end was great too! Thank you for entering!281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRMXLs6vEaD
Total: 23.5 pts
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#4: “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4U2s69OtSZ
Yes! Rue and Malachi are back! And you created such a beautiful story in under five hundred words! 281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiKQJ9SFkG0
I can’t lie, you’re amazing with dialogue. Keep up the great work, and thank you for entering!!281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8XtWptVv33
Total: 20 pts
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#5: “To Wait Out The Rain” by Clovers281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjTcuenZuPW
The last two lines were just perfect, Clovers! And the line, "Our lips fit like two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, the kiss gentle and warm, producing a heated fuzzy sensation in my chest” is such a beautiful description. Thank you for entering!281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ7IBokWhsE
Total: 21 pts281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkrwWy6a4JK
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Honorable Mentions!! (In no particular order)281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRdI6AjRDaV
~~ “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame ~~ 281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8UWAmKFNoh
~~ “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0 ~~
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Never stop writing,
Julia281Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzBAbKT7qWW
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