FICTIONAL STORY **ARMY GIRL**
PLOT: Sally an army soldier, has returned home to reunite with her mother and younger sister. But an associate of hers seeks out revenge against Barbara due to jealousy.
TOWNSLAND: sunny coastal town where story is set, home of locations such as Downside Tavern, James Park, Tavern Street, Townsland Army Base, Townsland University.
CHARACTERS:38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡChzQvG7tlf
- SALLY: protagonist, blonde hair, green eyes, army reserve soldier, protective, brave, first daughter of Barbara, muscular woman, older sister of Jean, occupation of Cyber Analyst at army base, fit38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqyy0rS4lvi
- BARBARA: mother of Sally and Jean, caring, loving, black hair, green eyes,38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvXcAUeyCBx
- JEAN: younger sister of Sally, youngest daughter of Barbara, anxious, shy, socially anxious, university student studying Teaching38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3lgHW9elfI
- MAX: associate of Sally, army soldier, evil, jealous, envy of Sally because of her perfection, brown hair, green eyes38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQlhRQw4JXi
- OFFICER: police officer of Townsland Station, caring, protective, respectful of Sally of her army duties
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##PART 1
INT. BARBARA'S RESIDENCE
(It is a Sunday at 9am, a bright sunny day. Sally arrives to home from the airport, flying home from her Army Base; as a reserved Army Soldier. Sally's mother Barbara, is reading the local newspaper, whilst her younger sister Jean is asleep. Sally arrives home and knocks on the door. Barbara opens the door, and is elated to see her daughter after 7 months of service. Barbara's Residence - is a burgundy-brown brick home with a white-tiled roof)
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUw0ehiNFh4
(elated; to Sally) Oh my darling Sally. How are you?
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5OshVpkCh9
(smiles; to Barbara) Hello Mum. I'm good. It's good to see you.
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgvdBmSPKdV
(hugging Sally) Oh its' so good to see you to. Welcome back to Townsland, honey.
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6JrnR7uMtI
(hugging Barbara) Thanks Mum. How's Jean?
(Barbara stops hugging Sally)
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQw8fhrAmGq
(smiles; to Sally) Snoozing, what else. She's just about finished to become a Teacher. It's her dream you know.
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrEYR0oWoZX
(smiles; to Barbara) To teach overseas. Yeah it is.
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRyDPZ5OhdJ
(smiles; to Sally) Come on in sweetie. Come on in.
(Barbara invites her daughter Sally inside the home. Sally enters the living room, and sits on the 7-seater blue lounge suite. Sally puts her army backpack on the floor beside the lounge, once seated)
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INT. JEAN'S ROOM
(Jean wakes up and yawns. Jean stretches her arms, and is wearing a pink nightie; stating "I Am Sweet." Jean gets up off her bed, and exits her room)
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INT. BARBARA'S RESIDENCE
(Jean walks out into the lounge-room. Sally notices Jean, Jean notices Sally. Jean screams in excitement)
JEAN38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQJC9YGjPvA
(screams in excitement; to Sally) Oh Sally. SALLY!!
(Sally hugs Jean)
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYePpmp5qYh
(hugging Jean) It's so good to see you sis. How are your studies going?
(Jean ignores Sally's question, and continues hugging Sally)
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqpqJy7BI5I
(waiting for Jean's response) Um. Jean?
(Jean stops hugging Sally, and reverts her attention back to Sally)
JEAN38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfTVWGaebEu
(cries; to Sally) Oh sorry Sally. I'm just so excited to see you.
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuxCXeo9LXJ
(confused; to Jean) Why are you crying for? Why are you crying if you're that excited to see me?
JEAN38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmhXdOkPnf1
(to Sally) Sally. Mum and I haven't seen you in 7 months. It's been a long time. No outings with my sister. I miss it.
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVanntOnEIy
(smiles; to Jean) Well I'm off on a 3 month break. We've got plenty of time to chat and catch up.
JEAN38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZByjA2bw6Q
(smiles; to Sally) Okay.
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzgKjheSzCA
(smiles; to Sally & Jean) I'll shout some brekky today. Let's go to Downside Tavern. Let's go.
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INT. DOWNSIDE TAVERN
(Downside Tavern - beachy, interior environment with yellow chairs, green fake life-size palm trees for ornament decoration, surround the total area of the restaurant. Minutes later - Sally, Jean and Barbara are seated down in their respected seats, each enjoying a mug of cappuccino)
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpVhixMi01B
(smiles; to Barbara & Jean) I swear. Downside Tavern is still the same. Best coffee in town. I love coming here.
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD3XicZXw75
(smiles; to Sally) I know you do. That's why I chose this place for a cup of coffee.
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnx5e3Ke4My
(smiles; to Barbara & Jean) I'll order brekky.
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD9owsHAUIT
(smiles; to Sally) No I will Sally. I wanna shout. Sorry. Too busy enjoying my coffee.
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJjROc44N0Q
(smiles; to Barbara) Okay Mum.
(Minutes later - the family of three are enjoying their breakfast of 'poached eggs and sourdough bread.' Jean is looking through her smartphone of photos, whilst eating her breakfast)
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDN9C5rAJAf
(smiles; to Jean) So Jean. How's Teaching Studies going?
JEAN38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRkCF7DPlNK
(smiles; to Sally) So good Sally. I love it. 4 months to graduation. I can't wait.
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCRA4vmvsay
(smiles; to Jean) I bet you can't wait.
JEAN38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCMH78F0g0I
(smiles; to Sally) Oh I can't. I-
(Suddenly, a bullet is shot near Jean's elbow. Jean screams in shock. Every patron at Downside Tavern, looks at Jean in shock, and begins to panic and scream. Sally is shocked by the near-attempted murder of her sister; and is desperate for answers)
JEAN38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx82hZegve4
(screams) Oh MY GOD. OH MY GOD.
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFrfw1IGDbZ
(panics; to Jean) Oh Jean. Oh Jean. Are you okay?
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMJrRVjOT32
(concerned; to Jean) What the? Jean. Sis. Were you shot? Were you shot?
JEAN38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnTChRwmjBU
(cries; to Sally) It missed my elbow. I nearly got shot in my elbow.
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtjRDfNdnIx
(cries; to Jean) Oh Jean. (to Sally) Sal. Let's go home. I don't feel safe here.
(The crowd of Downside Tavern screams in shock, and hurriedly make an escape. Minutes later, the police arrive at Downside Tavern. Police officers front a timid, frightened Jean and ask for questions in privacy. Barbara and Sally wait outside, until questioning with Jean is done. Barbara is in shock, Sally is desperate to find out what happened to her sister)
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INT. TAVERN STREET - OUTSIDE DOWNSIDE TAVERN
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7XTWVtoeLD
(cries; to Sally) Oh Sal. Sally. Who tried to shoot our Jean? Who? Who dares shoot our Jean?
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ26laFqylXH
(determined) I have no idea Mum. But I will find out why-
(The police officers leave Downside Tavern; having finished questioning with Jean. They make their way to Sally, acknowledging her from the Army)
OFFICER38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMfA2n7I8tv
(to Sally) Thanks for your service Miss.
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh8V7xAsQpI
(to Officer 1) No worries.
OFFICER38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjihlbMVh3C
(to Sally) Your sister couldn't give us much input into what happened but-
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9yNf8QNHE1
(annoyed; to Officer) Of course she couldn't. SHE'S IN SHOCK. Someone just tried to shoot my daughter.
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(worried; to Barbara) I know madamn. I'm sorry this happened. I didn't mean to offend you. I just came to say that my colleague and I will help you undergo this investigation into what happened to your daughter.
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGckv9zoCfN
(cries; to Officer) Thank you. I'm sorry. I'm-
(Barbara cries. Sally embraces her mother. An upset Jean walks outside Downside Tavern, and cries. Barbara embraces Jean into her arms)
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMLz2z8E8KY
(breathes; to Barbara) Let's go home.
OFFICER38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9zl77RAjhJ
(to Sally) Keep in touch, and we will keep in touch.
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXeRN8FBUau
(to Officer) Sure thing. See ya-
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INT. BARBARA'S RESIDENCE-
(Jean storms into her room, upset and screaming by what has just happened. Barbara cries and sits on the 7-seater lounge. Sally stands in shock, by what has happened to her younger sister)
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv3rMaTjHz8
(cries; to Sally) I'm going to spend some time with Jean. Feel free to explore Townsland a bit. Much has changed since you've been gone.
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPcTuHkFSwi
(worried; to Barbara) No we will go spend some time with Jean - like a family.
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INT. JEAN'S ROOM
(Jean is crying whilst seated on her bed, with a cushion covering her face. Barbara opens Jean's door and sits beside her daughter, on the bed)
JEAN38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv4qalhZ1Kc
(cries) Who would do this to me Mum? Who?
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0q5yplbcLl
(confident) I will find out sis. I will find out. Whoever did this to my little sis will pay.
BARBARA38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9z0pQOX1LJ
(cries) I will help find out who did this to Jean. We will do it as a family.
(Jean cries repeatedly. Barbara embraces Jean into her arms)
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INT. SPARE ROOM AT BARBARA'S RESIDENCE
(Hours pass - it is 10pm. A cold, windy night - Barbara and Jean are both asleep. Sally is wearing her green-set of long-sleeve pyjamas. Sally is lying awake - dedicated to finding out who attempted to shoot her younger sister at Downside Tavern. A brave, detective Barbara changes into her army-based camouflage trousers and jacket, and boots up her laptop she has sitting on her desk; she sits on her blue office chair at her desk. Suddenly, Sally's phone rings. The phone call reads unknown, Sally answers the phone call anyway)
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡubDz80CQox
(answers phone) Hello.
MAX38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqp4sqAyeEF
(angrily) Hello. It was me.
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPDhpbe4IqO
(annoyed) WHAT?
MAX38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWPGRXqqSk0
(chuckles) Your sister. It was me dufus-
(Sally smacks her bedside table hard, angered at the news she has received - the news of her fellow-army soldier attempting to kill her sister)
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHyUXMiXHQj
(angrily) YOU WHAT? YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS!!
MAX38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuBGu7c2XQE
(chuckles) RELAX. I MISSED-
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ24E7kFQKWk
(angrily) MAX. YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS. I'm reporting you-
MAX38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMZX4E3a4Hh
(chuckles) NO. YOU LISTEN HERE. I'M JEALOUS OF YOU. I DESPISE YOU. I ENVY YOU. YOU'RE SO GOOD AT EVERYTHING AND I HATE IT. NOW YOU'RE GOING TO FEEL LIKE WHAT IT'S LIKE TO HAVE NOTHING. AND I MEAN... NOTHING!!
(As her position title of a Cyber Analyst in the Army - Sally tracks Max's location and draws police satellites to it. Sally hangs up on Max's phone call, and makes her way to Max's location)
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INT. JAMES PARK - TOWNSLAND
(Sally arrives at James Park. Max and Sally notice each other - Sally is furious. A fight breaks out in between the two - Max chokeholds Sally, Sally struggles to breathe. Sally kneecaps Max in the elbow, Max groans. Max punches Sally in the eye, giving Sally a bruised black eye. Sally knocks Max out with a kick to the head. Minutes later, the police authorities arrive at the location Sally forwarded their satellite to)
OFFICER38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6C44JI4Bu6
(shocked; to Sally) Is this the offender of your sister?
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6wvhPxtItH
(injured; to Officer) Yes. Yes it is-
OFFICER38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtQsPx0uA9d
(worried; to Sally) Are you alright??
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKnig9GFFEg
(tired; to Officer) Yes. I'm just stuffed.
(A blue sedan arrives at the scene. Jean identifies her older sister Sally, and runs toward her bigger sister. Sally notices Jean and hugs her younger sister. Barbara makes her way to her daughters)
JEAN38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEUhcPukeyI
(stressed; to Sally) Oh Sally. You worried me so much-
(Barbara hugs both her daughters. Jean notices her sister's black eye)
JEAN38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSB8UBmmCCr
(cries; to Sally) Sally. Your eye. It's black and bruised.
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(cries; to Sally) What?? Oh no-
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEG4Y8xwx1o
(reassures) Mum. Jean. Relax. I'm all good. Our offender is being taken care of.
JEAN38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc86N5fpE63
(smiles; to Sally) Good.
OFFICER38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBO5tGuwAh6
(to Sally) Thanks Sally. He's going to court for acts of attempted murder and assault. He's going to court.
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(to Sally) Thanks for you assistance and your dedication to our country. We love you-
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(smiles; to Officer) Thank you. I'm proud to be working with you officers.
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(smiles; to Officer) You know. If you do ever think about leaving the army - we have a position here for you. No questions. You're hired-
SALLY38Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkZ9EYNWHzx
(to Officer 1) You know. I was thinking about calling it quits in 3 months. But why not, now. Sure-
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(smiles; to Sally) Welcome to the team-
(Officer shakes Sally's hand. Sally smiles. Sally, Jean and Barbara embrace)
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(to Jean and Barbara) Let's go home and watch a great movie together... Like a family...
PART 1 ENDS
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