Title: LOLLI223Please respect copyright.PENANALlFPpMtkaX
Credit: written by BROOKE EM223Please respect copyright.PENANAOr5Mje9yfE
Draft Date: 18 May 2023
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“LOLLI”
PLOT: A young woman wins the once-in-a-lifetime lottery. Instead of managing her newfound fortune; she spends it all on a sour worm lolly addiction...
LOCATIONS:223Please respect copyright.PENANApsDlSlAlPO
- LILYVALE: fictional city; trams everywhere; cars everywhere
CHARACTERS:223Please respect copyright.PENANAKOqOZmbs8Q
- LOLLI: blonde hair; green eyes; 24 years; WILLY & MABEL’s daughter; hairdresser223Please respect copyright.PENANArKaQHaUH7F
- WILLY: gray hair; 54 years; father of LOLLI; husband of MABEL; retired223Please respect copyright.PENANA6X6M655ejB
- MABEL: gray hair; 54 year; mother of LOLLI; wife of WILLY
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INT. LOLLI’sS BEDROOM - WILLY’S RESIDENCE
(FADE INSIDE LOLLI’s BEDROOM. LOLLI wakes up in her purple nightie; and hops out of bed; then brushes her hair; tying her hair up in a bun minutes later. She smiles at the mirror; then makes her way downstairs....)
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INT. DINING ROOM - WILLY’S RESIDENCE
(FADE INSIDE the DINING ROOM. THE DINING ROOM - described as white-interior C-SHAPED KITCHEN; LOLLI smiles as she looks at her happy parents. She greets them..)
LOLLI223Please respect copyright.PENANAhBzsr4cSf9
(smiles to parents) Hey MUM.. hey DAD..s
(BOTH WILLY & MABEL smile at their daughter. MABEL hugs her daughter LOLLI. LOLLI gets annoyed)
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(annoyed to MABEL) Yes MUM...I know you love your morning hugs... I know... I know...
(MABEL STOPS HUGGING HER DAUGHTER AND SMILES AT HER)
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(smiles to LOLLI) Oh LOLLI darling... you know how much I love you... I want you to always remember it and never forget it..
(MABEL & LOLLI both smile to each other...)
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(Smiles to WILLY) Hey DaD... it’s lotto tonight... I can’t wait... I really can not wait til lotto tonight... the jackbox is going to be amazing tonight... ahh..
(LOLLI JUMPS IN EXCITEMENT... MABEL SMILES)
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MABEL223Please respect copyright.PENANAYaBIhIrczn
(SMILES TO LOLLI) WHAT’S THE JACKPOT TONIGHT? WILL I BE A WINNER...
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(corrects MABEL) No MUM... will I be a winner? It’s will we be a winner...
(EVERYONE smiles and chuckles...)
LOLLI223Please respect copyright.PENANAM6Hzujqzz0
(smiles to parents) We have to win... I no longer want to do my stupid hairdressing job... I want the fame, fortune... the popularity..... the newest most rich millionaire in town..
WILLY223Please respect copyright.PENANARt584hjS8z
(worried to LOLLI) Ah LOLLI... that would not be a good idea telling everyone...
MABEL223Please respect copyright.PENANASlvHQBYDhh
(WORRIED TO WILLY) WHY NOT? I MEAN... IT’S A ONCE-IN-A-LIFETIME SURPRISE... I MEAN... WOULDN’T YOU WANT TO SHARE THAT AMAZING NEWS WITH LOVED ONES... I MEAN....
(WILLY breathes and speaks his mind)
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(worried to MABEL) you’ll get all the gold diggers at you.. the fake friends... it wouldn’t be good..
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(worried to WILLY) Oh... (looks at LOLLU) Your dad is right about that...
(LOLLI smiles at her father in agreement)
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(smiles to WILLY) yeah DAD... you are right... you are most absolutely right..
(EVERYONE smiles... A PAUSE)
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(smiles to parents) Well besides that... I really want to win the $30 million jackpot tonight... I so bad..
(MABEL & WILLY smile at each other; then back at their daughter.. LOLLI smiles and questions them..)
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(smiles to parents) WHAT..
(WILLy speaks)
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(smiles to LOLLI) I just hope you do darling... I know how much you love this luxurious life..
(LOLLI smiles)
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(smiles to WILLY) Oh who doesn’t DADDY... who doesn’t.... the fashion pieces... the pool..
(WILLY smiles)
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(cont'd to WILLY) Everything... i can get you a new toolbox (to MABEL) and MA... I can get you every candle collection you have ever dreamed of... oh yes... (excited) Yes... yes... it will be so good..
(EVERYONE smiles.... LOLLI continues)
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(cont'd to WILLY & MABEL) I will win.... I know it's hard... I know the odds are against me... but I have to believe MA & PA..
WILLY223Please respect copyright.PENANA7C0uW9boKZ
(smiles to LOLLI) And believe you will..
(A PAUSE)
MABEL223Please respect copyright.PENANASvMwkvr8ab
(smiles to LOLLI) Lolli DARLING... I was thinking about taking us all out for some lunch... what you say?
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(smiles to MABEL) Yes.. yes of course... down LANEWAY CAFE... arw we?
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(smiles to LOLLI) Laneway CAFE it is... and yes... I know you only want to go there for the free TOFFEE APPLE dessert..
(LOLLI GROWS EXCITED FOR THE TOFFEE APPLE; AND SQUEALS IN EXCITEMENT...)
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(Smiles to LOLLI) Calm down LOLLI.. calm down... man i hope the toffee don't make you too ovelry excited....
(EVERYONE giggles..)
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(Smiles to everyone) Okay everyone... it’s time to get ready.... come on...
(THE SCENE ENDS with the happy LOLLI making her way to the bedroom to get changed....)
(FADE OUT; END OF SCENE)
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INT. INSIDE - LANEWAY CAFE
(FADE INSIDE LANEWAY CAFE. THE INTERIOR OF LANEWAY CAFE; is described as blue/white chairs, tiles with the staff wearing blue/white checkered attire. MABEL, WILLY & LOLLI sit at TABLE 47 awaiting their food’s arrival. WILLY speaks...)
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(Speaks to LOLLI) Well LOLLI... I hope you enjoy this beautiful lunch... at your favourite cafe.. (smiles to MABEL) Thanks MABEL to... thanks honey..
(MABEL SMILES...)
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(Smiles to parents) I just can’t wait for my spaghetti bolognese... ahh... can’t wait..
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(MINUTES PASS; the food arrives. LOLLI is served spaghetti bolognese; with her parents both being served a THAI SALAD... everyone begins eating... MABEL decides to speak)
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(Smiles to LOLLI) So LOLLI darling... what dessert.... what piece of free desert do you wish to pick up tonight??
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(Smiles to MABEL) A slice of carrot cake... yummy... so yummy MUM... so yummy..
(LOLLI & MABEL smile.... they continue eating and finish minutes later...)
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(Smiles to MABEL) Now it’s time for my carrot cake..
(LOLLI BURPS AND GIGGLES)
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(Smiles to MABEL) Woah..... sorry.... sorry MUM..
(MABEL IS NOT IMPRESSED)
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(annoyed to LOLLI) Really darling.... in public... damn...
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(smiles to MABEL) I’m sorry MUM... I’m sorry..... I am sorry..
(MABEL BREATHES THOUGH IS STILL ANNOYED... MABEL & WILLY WATCH THEIR DAUGHTER MAKE THEIR WAY TO THE FREE DESSERT TRAY; PICKING UP A SLICE OF CARROT CAKE: THEN CONSUMING IT MINUTES LATER.. SHE SMILES AND BURPS EVEN LOUDER... EVERYONE LOOKS IN SHOCK. LOLLI is embarrassed)
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(embarrassed to patrons) Sorry... sorry people... I just love my sweet treats..
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(to patrons) Sorry everyone.... my daughter is a grub.... we shall leave now..
(MABEL grabs LOLLI”s hand; as they make their way to WILLY to exit the LANEWAY CAFE)
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INT. LIVING ROOM - WILLY’s RESIDENCE
(FADE IN the LIVING ROOM at WILLY’s RESIDENCE. The family of MABEL, WILLY & LOLLI sit on the three-seater green sofa; enjoying peace and family time... WILLY speaks)
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(smiles to family) Well I know the lotto is hard to win... maybe I should have a go at these house lotteries..
(LOLLI swiftly responds)
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(to WILLY) No daddy... no... the lotto is so much more worth it..., the $30 million is so worth it... I can buy lots of houses rather than one..
(WILLY SMILES)
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(cont’d to WILLY) I can DADDY... I can buy so many homes... invest in real estate.... and oh yes... the fun... the fun with the money..
(WILLY continues to smile)
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(Smiles to LOLLI) Well darling... I just hope you’ve got the winning numbers tonight..... I just hope you do...
(LOLLI SMILES)
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(smiles to WILLY) Okay... I am doing the lotto numbers now.. six numbers to pick.. I will pick my usual.... 9, 12, 5, 7, 8, 10... those are my numbers..
(WILLY smiles... the camera records LOLLI putting in the lotto numbers via the phone...)
# 2 HOURS PASS
(LOLLI, WILLY & MABEL watch the lotto ball numbers be drawn... everyone smiles in excitement...)
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(smiles to everyone) Okay.... let’s just hope we win.... I mean... (smiles to LOLLI) Let’s hope your numbers win darling LOLLI..
(LOLLI smiles in excitement... as the numbers are drawn... the numbers are drawn and the exact numbers... LOLLI, MABEL & WILLY notice and jump in joy...)
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(excited to herself) Ahh... ahh... we won... we won..
(LOLLI becomes more excited; and screams with laughter read joy....)
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(excited to herself) I WON.... I WON.... I WON... I WON... I’ve got the lucky numbers..
(WILLY smiles with LOLLI; and hugs her)
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(smiles to LOLLI) Good on you darling.. good on you... good on..
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(excited to LOLLI) We won DAD... I can now buy your ranch house... me a house... I can invest in real estate.. my dream house... ahh.. I can’t believe it.... I can not believe it... AHH..
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(THE CAMERA CLOSED on LOLLI, WILLY & MABEL hugging in family joy...)
(FADE OUT; END OF SCENE)
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## THE NEXT MORNING
INT. LOLLI’s BEDROOM - WILLY’S RESIDENCE
(FADE INSIDE LOLLI’S BEDROOM AT WILLY’S RESIDENCE. LOLLI’S EYES OPEN AS SHE RECALL WINNING THE LOTTO THE NIGHT BEFORE... AND SCREAMS IN EXCITEMENT IN MEMORY AS SHE WAKES IN RECALL... SHE SPEAKS IN HAPPINESS)
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(excited to herself) We have to look at houses... we have to look at houses... DADDY and I... and MUMMY... yes... yes..
(LOLLI jumps in excitement; as she prepares to change in a casual green shirt and black shorts... with green sandals... she rushes downstairs to her parents...)
(FADE OUT; END OF SCENE)
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INT. LIVING ROOM - WILLY’S RESIDENCE
(FADE INSIDE THE LIVING ROOM AT WILLY’S RESIDENCE. LOLLI SMILES AS SHE NOTICES HER HAPPY PARENTS DRESSED IN CASUAL CLOTHING... SHE SPEAKS)
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(excited to parents) Mum... DADDY... I just can’t believe I won... we won... I just can’t believe it... ahh... ah...
(HER PARENTS smile at her success and hug her... LOLLI cries in happiness)
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(smiles to parents) We have to go look for houses... we have to..
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(smiles to LOLLI) and we will darling... we will.... let’s go..
(LOLLI stops hugging her parents and jumps in joy.... the scene closes)
(FADE OUT; END OF SCENE)
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INT. RECEPTION - LILYVALE HOMES
(FADE INSIDE the RECEPTION of the real estate LILYVALE HOMES. LOLLI smiles whilst accompanied by her parents; entering the real estate agency. The interior is red-coloured; with the receptionist noticing the family; greeting them)
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(Smiles to everyone) Hello... hello there... how can I be of assistance??
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(smiles to RECEPTIONIST) Yes sure...
(LOLLI quickly responds out of excitement)
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(smiles to RECEPTIONIST) Yes... we’d like to buy a house... house please.
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(THE RECEPTIONIST smiles)
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(smiles to LOLLI) YEs... yes sure... I will just get the agent out here to exist you... we have many residential properties to buy... I will just get her out here..
(THE FAMILY smiles in excitement; whilst they wait for the REAL ESTATE AGENT...)
(FADE OUT; END OF SCENE)
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INT. AGENT OFFICE - LILYVALE HOMES
(FADE INSIDE THE AGENT OFFICE. THE AGENT OFFICE is filled with a rectangular-maple desk with an all-in-one desktop atop the table. LOLLI and her happy parents sit beside her)
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(smiles to everyone) Well it sounds you all... just got a big inheritance huh.
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(smiles to AGENT JANE) Something better than that..
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(smiles to LOLLI) Oh... okay...
(A PAUSE)
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(smiles to everyone) So a house.... you wish to buy... I have properties that are just waiting to be purchased..
(AGENT JANE hands LOLLI and her family a booklet of available homes to buy with inside and outside pictures. The family smiles as they look at the photos; picking a house minutes later)
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(smiles to AGENT JANE) okay... 2 SUNNY LANE... it’s the dream... a pool... a tennis court.... every man’s dream..
(MABEL GIGGLES AT WILLY)
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(giggles to WILLY) Hey.... every family dream’s home... (smiles to AGENT JANE) The great AUSTRALIAN dream..
(EVERYONE smiles)
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(smiles to herself) Awesome...
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(smiles to AGENT JANE) And I uh... i want 1/2 DOLLY STREET... the nice apartment complex... oh it looks so amazing... so me....
(A PAUSE)
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(cont’d to AGENT JANE) It will look so good as I “ME” it...
(WILLY is confused by LOLLI’s words)
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(Confused to LOLLI) “ME” IT... me it LOLLI..
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(to WILLY) I mean... decorate it with my love of things..
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(Smiles to LOLLI) You and your GEN Z talk... it confuses me sometimes...
(LOLLI chuckles then looks back at AGENT JANE)
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(smiles to everyone) Okay... here is both your keys... all yours... enjoy your new purchase..
(LOLLI squeals in excitement.... as AGEMT JANE hands her both the keys... LOLLI and her family make their way out of the AGENT’S OFFICE. AGENT JANE smiles)
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(Smiles to herself) Well they had a good day..... good luck to them.
(FADE OUT; END OF SCENE)
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## 7 DAYS PASS223Please respect copyright.PENANAE36c6vR5hw
INT. LIVING ROOM - 1/2 DOLLY STREET LILYVALE
(FADE INSIDE THE LIVING ROOM; LOLLI SITS AND SMILES ON HER FURNISHED RED-SOFA IN HER NEW APARTMENT. SHE LAYS DOWN, HAPPY RICH WITH HER MILLION DOLLAR WINNINGS.... SHE SPEAKS TO HERSELF)
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(smiles to herself) I just can’t believe I won... I can not believe I won the LOTTO.... bought this nice home; bought myself this lavish apartment... ahhh.. I love it.
(LOLLI smiles whilst looking around her apartment)
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(smiles to herself) I am now simply the richest person in town... I mean in this city... ahhh... ahh...
(LOLLI smiles; closes her eyes and starts daydreaming)
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(Smiles to herself) I just want some munchies.. yeah..
(A PAUSE)
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(smiles to herself) Yeah... I just want some munchies to myself.... and watch a good old movie... yeah... yeah... that is what I want...
(LOLLI sits up; and thinks about sweets; and smiles)
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(smiles to herself) I just want lollies.. those nice colourful, tasty, slimy and sugar-like snakes... to fill my stomach..... yes... yes... I’m gonna get myself some delivered...
(LOLLI then proceeds to grab her phone; and organises delivery of lollies by her doorstep)
## 20 MINS PASS
(THE delivery of SOUR WORMS has arrived at the doorstep of 1/2 DOLLY STREET LILYVALE. She smiles as she picks up the parcel; and proceeds to sit back on the red sofa. She then switches the TV ON with her bag of sour worms...)
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LOLLI223Please respect copyright.PENANAamurAeB4MQ
(Smiles to herself) What is showing on today? I’m in a need of a comedy flex... please tell me something is good on...,
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(LOLLI flicks the TV on; and notices a comedy flix on. She smiles..)
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(Smiles to herself) Beauty... beauty... a great old comedy flex is on.... YES.... YES...
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(LOLLI begins watching the comedy fix; whilst eating an entire bag of sour worms.. THE CAMERA PANS OUT ON LOLLI watching and enjoying the comedy flex; whilst eating yet another two bags of sour worms)
(FADE OUT; END OF SCENE)
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# 4 WEEKS PASS223Please respect copyright.PENANApAXXmk5K6R
INT. LIVING ROOM - 2 SUNNY LANE LILYVALE
(FADE IN the LIVING ROOM. LOLLI; having accumulated a massive amount of weight from consuming lollies; is now dangerously overweight. She cries at her weight as she stumbles into the LIVING ROOM... her parents look shocked at their now overweight daughter)
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(shocked to LOLLI) Lolli.. LOLLI... what happened? What happened to you? What...
(LOLLI cries as she looks at her upset mother.... absolutely devastated by her weight gain. WILLY is upset and shocked by this to..)
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(worried to LOLLI) Lolli.. LOLLI... what... what.
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(upset to LOLL) Lolli... what... what have you done in three weeks time? How did you gain such a vast amount of weight in such 4 weeks? How... how?
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(cries to MABEL) I... my sweet tooth... my sweet tooth is to blame.. that’s what... that is what..
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(upset to LOLLI) Lolli... LOLLI... oh my GOD...
(LOLLI sits on the new three green-sofa; beside her mother and cries in her arms...)
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(cries to MABEL) I... I hate being fat... I’m an idiot... I’m an idiot.... an idiot... I am such an idiot.
(MABEL worries as she comforts her daughter. WILLY is ashamed and speaks his mind)
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(upset to LOLLI) Lolli... LOLLI darling... we called you lolli because we love lollies to... that doesn’t give you an excuse to eat lollies because you’re..
(MABEL is angered by WILLY’s comments and shouts at him)
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(shouts to WILLY) WILLY... not now..
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(upset to MABEL) I’m sorry MABEL.... I just... I don’t want to see our daughter in an early. grave... that’s all.
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(shouts to WILLY) Our daughter is in an invulnerable situation at the moment.. please have some feelings.
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(saddened to MABEL) I know... I..
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(LOLLI hurt by her father’s comments; shouts at him)
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(shouts at WILLY) I can’t believe you are ashamed of me... I can’t believe it DAD... you are my father.. you are supposed to love me no matter what..
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(upset to LOLLI) I’m sorry.... LOLLI I didn’t mean to fat-shame you.. I.
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(shouts to WILLY) Stuff you DAD... stuff you..
(THE ANGERED, OVERWEIGHT LOLLI stands back up; holding her overweight belly and continues shouting at her father)
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(shouts to WILLY) STUFF YOU DAD... STUFF YOU... I’m out..
(MABEL is hurt)
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(Hurt to LOLLI) Lolli... LOLLI.. don’t go... DON’t GO..
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(shouts to MABEL) Stuff you... STUFF YOU... STUFF both of you..
(LOLLI storms out... the camera pans out on the shocked MABEL & WILLY looking at each other)
(FADE OUT; END OF SCENE)
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INT. LIVING ROOM - 1/2 DOLLY STREET LILYVALE
(FADE IN THE LIVING ROOM... the upset LOLLI cries on her sofa; and notices another ten packs of sour worms. She cries and cries to herself)
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(cries to herself) I can’t... I can’t believe DAD hates me... he fat-shamed me... he’s ashamed.... he’s ashamed.
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(LOLLI CONTINUES TO CRY)
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(cries to herself) Well... well stuff him.... if he can’t accept me for who I am... stuff him...
(A PAUSE)
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(cries to herself) Dad..., fathers are supposed to love and cherish their daughters.., mine... hates me for my weight gain... well..
(LOLLI screams in hurt)
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(cries to herself) Well STUFF HIM... STUFF HIM..
(LOLLI continues crying to herself. A PAUSE)
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(cries to herself) I am not going to change myself for him... stuff him.... stuff my whole family... I will never forgive them for fat-shaming me...
(THE CAMERA PANS OUT ON LOLLI eating another 5 packs of sour worms...)
(FADE OUT; END OF SCENE)
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INT. LIVING ROOM - 2 SUNNY LANE LILYVALE
(FADE IN THE LIVING ROOM... MABEL IS UPSET WITH WILLY AT HIS COMMENTS TO THEIR DAUGHTER AND SPEAKS HER MIND)
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(annoyed to WILLY) I... I can’t believe you WILLY... fat-shaming our daughter like that... how dare you..
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(worried to MABEL) I... I’m sorry... I shouldn’t have done that.. but...
(A PAUSE)
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(annoyed to MABEL) I am generally worried about LOLLI’s health now... that is what I am worried about... is that such a bad thing..
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(annoyed to WILLY) No... but fat-shaming is not the right way..
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(annoyed to MABEL) I know.., I need to give her a motivational kick or something.... to lose that blabber of hers..
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(shouts to WILLY) Again... again... enough with the insults....
(A PAUSE)
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(shouts to WILLY) What about when you met me? I was FAT... don’t you REMEMBER...
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(shouts to MABEL) Yes... YES...
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(shouts to WILLY) You still accepted me for my weight gain and you encouraged me to lose weight... got me to a fitness instructor and led me to a healthy path of living..
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(shouts to MABEL) that’s right..
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(shouts to WILLY) And you did it all with kindness and respect.. and you... and with LOLLI... you fat-shame...
(A PAUSE)
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(shouts to MABEL) You are her father... lead her to a better path of living... then fat-shaming her... please..
(A PAUSE.. WILLY understands LOLLI’s words and begins changing his ways; speaking his mind)
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(upset to MABEL) you’re right... you’re right... I am sorry... I..
(A PAUSE)
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(upset to MABEL) I will... I will encourage her to exercise it off... get her to a gym... and motivate her with kindness and respect... and to not fat-shame her... I promise... I will...
(MABEL smiles)
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(smiles to WILLY) be a good father... be a good role model... please.. please...
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(MABEL & WILLY hug each other... with love...)
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(FADE OUT; END OF SCENE)
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INT. LIVING ROOM - 1/2 DOLLY STREET LILYVALE
(FADE IN; the LIVING ROOM. The overweight LOLLI cries whilst having have eaten another 5 sour worms... her heart begins to hurt; as she holds her hand to it...)
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(cries to herself) My heart... my heart... it hurts.... it hurts..
(LOLLI cries in pain; as the door knocks... she looks right at the door and questions who it is. She hears the voice of her mother; and ignores it...)
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(from outside; knocking door) LOLLI.... LOLLI... it’s MUM and DAD... please come and talk to us... we’re worried about you...
(LOLLI begins to struggle to breathe; and she coughs... MABEL continues knocking on the door to get her daughter’s attention)
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(from outside; knocking door) LOLLI.. LOLLI... LOLLI..
(THEY NOTICE the broken lock and break in; and are left shocked and stunned... as they notice an unconscious LOLLI. MABEL and WILLY begin to panic)
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(worried to MABEL) Oh no... LOLLI... LOLLI..
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(frantic to WILLY) our daughter... our daughter...
(MABEL RUNS TOWARDS HER UNCONSCIOUS DAUGHTER AND BENDS DOWN; listening to no heartbeat. WILLY LOOKS WORRIED; MABEL speaks frantically...)
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(cries to WILLY) Her heart.... LOLLI’s heart... it’s not beating... it’s not.
(MABEL worries and cries in fear; and tries to hear again but still nothing)
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(frantic to WILLY) Oh no... oh no..
(WILLY begins to panic more)
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(panics to MABEL) Oh no... oh no LOLLI.. oh no... what have I said.. what have I..
(MABEL tries to check a pulse; and nothing. She confirms their daughter is dead)
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(upset to WILLY) She’s dead... LOLLI is dead..
(WILLY and MABEL are both struck by grief...)
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(cries to WILLY) She’s dead.. SHE IS DEAD... no... NO...
(MABEL screams in grief...)
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(screams to herself) No... no.....
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(THE SCENE ENDS With MABEL & WILLY looking in shock and grief; at their daughter’s death...)
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(FADE OUT; END OF SCENE & STORY)223Please respect copyright.PENANACfnWnzuPk9