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在舊版描述雙方打鬥的段落,用字簡潔也很有畫面。而且要說全篇開頭的話,雖然新版有種悲壯感,但我覺得勢均力敵的局面會比一面倒更好看。284Please respect copyright.PENANAnaNAOI943n
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