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轉場這個部分,我小時候會介意覺得換場景要找符號區隔,但是後來發現這樣看起來更怪異,加上沒有小精靈幫忙我就整個隨它去了。8964 copyright protection181PENANAWJK7fyOMJR 維尼
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