x
No Plagiarism!dxCvJvs1FcUUVKOerQzqposted on PENANA 類型:不好說。8964 copyright protection480PENANAYWbaqOs19y 維尼
篇幅:長篇8964 copyright protection480PENANAEvaU1VaMXg 維尼
吐槽點:484Please respect copyright.PENANAcdCnyJBBAd
8964 copyright protection480PENANAXXdLU1UILR 維尼
光看簡介就不知道在寫什麼,一點都勾引不起興趣,除非耐下性子習慣一下才行。484Please respect copyright.PENANAKI8QPf6gGZ
8964 copyright protection480PENANAQCWmwTNflm 維尼
標籤貼史詩,嗯,好像一點都沒有感覺呢!整體看來大概就前面鋪陳太久,光看過場設定的文字大概就飽了,我真的要多多唸經才行呢!8964 copyright protection480PENANAq2q186HNYR 維尼
雖然感覺作者想要埋一些伏筆,但看到後面真的會忘記填坑的期待感。484Please respect copyright.PENANAhPRea5w670
8964 copyright protection480PENANAdQmiQmoNDv 維尼
優點:大概還算能理解的文字,交代的還算清楚。8964 copyright protection480PENANA4KE28tDSc0 維尼
15.158.61.52
ns 15.158.61.52da2