《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMR3STpWqcd
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvg4ALSPm6s
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBLwadPoN5z
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbTnwlpuYtq
而是是人在食用時能入口即化135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRaVWzA2YhF
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD0vfgyJeVQ
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡknvdJR3Hb5
使人不會因為時間的洪流135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjYrHHXewip
失去了炙熱135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoG85ELA8Fd
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBcPmlQ7ZVH
但夏季怎麼會有雪135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWty4ajfTut
令人加以反思135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcHmfm1Kq4Z
雪季不該有的畫面135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVdGe0YSYOH
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8YLR9CbZBd
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或許135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXM1Zlydfcs
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxJFYpiIs74
即便是來年135Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzms5wjasBQ
之後的每一年都依然如此
