《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXwbttnt4mJ
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLezWq4NYsT
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEo0I8oiZqe
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8dWaijFenv
而是是人在食用時能入口即化104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡINIspu4XFs
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEQekylc2n2
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6p7cvWnTVI
使人不會因為時間的洪流104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3lYHC0mGGh
失去了炙熱104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgT3nA5FplG
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlnl6O3apAB
但夏季怎麼會有雪104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg5Ls7QNGPh
令人加以反思104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhCFfE886eh
雪季不該有的畫面104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYDo2DlPqpJ
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVH4ra7VjFc
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或許104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmGyHWI8KEB
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxqNBFfRGSW
即便是來年104Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfPsZfJaMe9
之後的每一年都依然如此
