《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVRRryUkOO2
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ07IzJYkTw8
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwBS0VIDJQd
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxs1JSnnbu0
而是是人在食用時能入口即化85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡccTrzv213V
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ96swMX8ChC
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhE03WYqWiv
使人不會因為時間的洪流85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuFRIsB2SQp
失去了炙熱85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSqKOerwL0t
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFtiQkrFq6H
但夏季怎麼會有雪85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyqKszI3eSE
令人加以反思85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmAuaSq0jAt
雪季不該有的畫面85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ6zTD88y0x
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdColkoqjAg
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或許85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8mVfutj5t4
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbC0bMpq6cX
即便是來年85Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhxgHwy5vVw
之後的每一年都依然如此
