《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧113Please respect copyright.PENANAlZBShnonfN
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍113Please respect copyright.PENANAYOrl9lnGDX
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)113Please respect copyright.PENANAEY55AyW6Hb
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單113Please respect copyright.PENANA0l5I1K87fC
而是是人在食用時能入口即化113Please respect copyright.PENANAb4ZyvyY7JY
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」113Please respect copyright.PENANAmju26ElXPn
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久113Please respect copyright.PENANANqJvPlvaTb
使人不會因為時間的洪流113Please respect copyright.PENANAVJcJRQF3DC
失去了炙熱113Please respect copyright.PENANAZuBtJYkIox
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》113Please respect copyright.PENANABu7pQu8p6I
但夏季怎麼會有雪113Please respect copyright.PENANAb99i9drvwo
令人加以反思113Please respect copyright.PENANA0qdZ16gzXM
雪季不該有的畫面113Please respect copyright.PENANAjVJMJPT8c1
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏113Please respect copyright.PENANAsAamNhUCy5
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或許113Please respect copyright.PENANAVGmnvtMjfR
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣113Please respect copyright.PENANAd39nbB0DON
即便是來年113Please respect copyright.PENANATfW4TFScTP
之後的每一年都依然如此