A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAzJM6jKEo3K
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—372Please respect copyright.PENANAL9l4MVlP15
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANA78Te1sHkSO
你指標題?372Please respect copyright.PENANAegczWLLspF
但有時訂標題也很困難~372Please respect copyright.PENANAHi8qFvARmM
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAe0zWQcncQH
嗯對啊,372Please respect copyright.PENANAEwoV0mrEmO
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAibiUolwUfT
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,372Please respect copyright.PENANAmAhdkDXR1s
所以沒有中心思想在。372Please respect copyright.PENANAurOjm0gQl7
我猜的對嗎?
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAbZVO3NiaLC
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。372Please respect copyright.PENANAPOcKfNnRSz
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?372Please respect copyright.PENANAbImuJKKRLF
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAUaWNvBg9VD
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!372Please respect copyright.PENANAixiCvZeaOM
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAEbYV2xQdlL
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANApQIZSou7kq
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD372Please respect copyright.PENANA0wPP1Ws7SD
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。372Please respect copyright.PENANA5JLu1lGV0i
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,372Please respect copyright.PENANA0YBNNoLhFx
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAT4ncGPWBFr
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。372Please respect copyright.PENANAYMP5H0FVzy
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。372Please respect copyright.PENANA6uMr1o9lOh
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAS7MoPKn9E4
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。372Please respect copyright.PENANA8jh9wscnjA
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAEERTNWmOBz
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAygd8UQi4Tf
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANA5Sv5sd21jn
好啊。
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAtrwSdHrDWV
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。372Please respect copyright.PENANA2Xl6Qk2Qjx
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。372Please respect copyright.PENANAqgu9svd28s
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。372Please respect copyright.PENANAQBTJMcDHgJ
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANA3RHVKzpJ5w
好的,372Please respect copyright.PENANAJaXF0fCX5p
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、372Please respect copyright.PENANAl7q6tO8c9D
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAdy7OQfUau4
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,372Please respect copyright.PENANAMbsxvmkMJC
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANACqVmyH00ZG
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANA6r1ZuazY8E
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。372Please respect copyright.PENANAMQpPoMwkqB
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料372Please respect copyright.PENANAxzGoKSwUAC
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。372Please respect copyright.PENANAr6ZIBlmv0c
比如:372Please respect copyright.PENANAmrryoGmXZC
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。372Please respect copyright.PENANAq8thniTW19
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。372Please respect copyright.PENANAChZ1dHeUwn
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAzbGLU2w60b
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAr7Cw8kYE2h
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAJv17CA6pAG
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAWf3SAdmO6Z
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係372Please respect copyright.PENANAO3pD5jcsr4
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAgofRLMzmzn
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAbletf94XKc
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,372Please respect copyright.PENANA8fIVdnG1uV
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAhKBsbY8Sb6
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAyqTRozd30f
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:372Please respect copyright.PENANAEtdenhde6V
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。372Please respect copyright.PENANAN9foVbg5t9
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAtnfeipFmRr
哦~
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAwkli4kusQ4
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:372Please respect copyright.PENANAIX6140IhH2
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)372Please respect copyright.PENANAzCKBuGSQHc
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)372Please respect copyright.PENANA6drDieUVWT
的故事
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAxdKtWyVcsm
好的、372Please respect copyright.PENANA4dR0ym9Mbr
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANABiAhZNHO8N
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAl3PtwtygQ5
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAVCcG5maCO6
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAnMRcb7VJXC
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAcu6RCzT7gv
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAVNM7KQJ8gi
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:372Please respect copyright.PENANAoaJECu3fkC
1.『爭執』372Please respect copyright.PENANAx4Hw8bqL58
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』372Please respect copyright.PENANAH8vmHcHP6z
3.『分手的情人(主角)』372Please respect copyright.PENANAqpRMukT1BA
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』372Please respect copyright.PENANAO8eazELtDp
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANALXvep0iJup
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAZmBznzaIv7
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANA1f0HDlX8Tf
那如果加入復仇呢372Please respect copyright.PENANAsPlhz46EIX
搶她大姐的未婚夫372Please respect copyright.PENANAJxCUYAJ30O
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAsN25kWkFQH
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了372Please respect copyright.PENANAP8PexvtORW
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……372Please respect copyright.PENANA6SEvegIOLz
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAiJ42IlnPsJ
好的,了解啦
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAG0xl92ewPC
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANABd1IwtYMwb
不一定要有吧~?372Please respect copyright.PENANAelTpUWp8F9
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAtbJ29cPQ10
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANA2T3050oIrB
比如372Please respect copyright.PENANAnvozywU968
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』372Please respect copyright.PENANAmKyVKII0qo
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAlPvHqFnBxV
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!372Please respect copyright.PENANAQmOVWz5cqr
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD372Please respect copyright.PENANAn7fbEeZbiN
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANAZuZ0vHy4ou
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 372Please respect copyright.PENANAgjX5pf1fdn
A君:372Please respect copyright.PENANAPV1kquyuy0
你好厲害啊!372Please respect copyright.PENANAfo3EqOkG6o
(重新把故事編排)372Please respect copyright.PENANATkV4qxu23b
龍晨P:372Please respect copyright.PENANA5Sp3poa47n
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~372Please respect copyright.PENANAjx5mFLUSdT