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#112

【意見詢問】

Devor 白棘

Dec 12, 2024

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No Plagiarism!hxJIukRRAVutPda8Vm9sposted on PＥNAＮＡ

先問重要的問題，假如後續故事都改為第三人稱，大家覺得如何？

71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk1g52U90c5

71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRmSYCJyygD

嘛......最近獲得了非常有力的建議與提點，所以正在嚴重的自省；而身為理科人的優點是，能盡快將情緒與理性脫鉤，雖然難過歸難過，但該前進的路還是要走。

簡單來說就是故事裡的視角問題，似乎有令讀者混亂的情況（也有人說沒有，但如果可以我還是希望能讓所有人看得愉快），我反覆思考我的寫作模式跟閱讀起來的感受，最佳解法似乎就是將第一人稱改為第三人稱。

簡單暴力，但我擔心會讓一路看到現在的讀者們產生撕裂感，所以想問問我鮮少的粉絲們的意見。

當然還是有第二、第三方案，方案二就是維持第一人稱，但關於主角外的視點將會從故事裡消失，直接解決有問題的部分；雖然也暴力，但對我而言其實不簡單，只靠一個人的視角要說出完整故事的功力我還並不具備。

方案三：第一人稱與第三人稱並進，看起來似乎不用改變，但還是有差距；其實這樣的小說是存在的，但它們閱讀起來並不會有混亂的感覺，所以我認為是我視角切換的太隨意，而且我對於第一人稱的細膩度還不足，讀者還未沉浸其中又換了個視角，才會出現如今的情況。

如果沒甚麼意見，我下一話會便會改為第三人稱敘述，如果沒有問題，便會逐步將前面的內容進行修改。

71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVMPkpmlDRy

71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKKcNxRyqF7

以下純心情抒發

：

老實說我沒想過會有這個問題

藉口甚麼的腦裡一大堆

但那是沒有意義的

畢竟這次總算有這麼明確的反饋

我必須好好處理它才行

不能再只是方便自己了

抱歉在小說裡穿插了這樣的公告

並非我的本意

但若想直接面對讀者、粉絲這是最快的方法

所以也希望能多多給我點聲音

我絕不排斥批評

不用跟我客氣

71Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcgCDf7HPeW

但我還是會有情緒的喔，不要無理亂噴

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#1 山難篇-01

#2 山難篇-02

#3 山難篇-03

#4 山難篇-04

#5 山難篇-05

#6 山難篇-06

#7 山難篇-07

#8 山難篇-08

#9 山難篇-09

#10 山難篇-10

#11 山難篇-11

#12 山難篇-12

#13 山難篇-13

#14 山難篇-14

#15 山難篇-終

#16 番外萬聖篇試讀版

#17 番外課金篇

#18 番外萬聖篇（付費文）

#19 皮蛇篇-1

#20 皮蛇篇-2

#21 皮蛇篇-3

#22 皮蛇篇-4

#23 皮蛇篇-5

#24 皮蛇篇-6

#25 皮蛇篇-7

#26 皮蛇篇-8

#27 皮蛇篇-9

#28 皮蛇篇-10

#29 皮蛇篇-終

#30 皮蛇篇-裏試讀版

#31 皮蛇篇裏（付費文）

#32 番外聖誕篇

#33 竹林篇-1

#34 竹林篇-2

#35 竹林篇-3

#36 竹林篇-4

#37 竹林篇-5

#38 竹林篇-6

#39 竹林篇-7

#40 竹林篇-8

#41 竹林篇-9

#42 竹林篇-10

#43 竹林篇-11

#44 竹林篇-12

#45 竹林篇-13

#46 竹林篇-終

#47 番外灶神篇試讀版

#48 番外灶神篇、竹林篇裏（付費文）

#49 歲首篇-1

#50 歲首篇-2

#51 歲首篇-3

#52 歲首篇-4

#53 歲首篇-5

#54 歲首篇-6

#55 歲首篇-7

#56 歲首篇-8

#57 歲首篇-9

#58 歲首篇-10

#59 歲首篇-11

#60 歲首篇-12

#61 歲首篇-13

#62 歲首篇-14

#63 歲首篇-15

#64 歲首篇-16

#65 歲首篇-終-上

#66 歲首篇-終-下

#67 冷冽篇-01

#68 冷冽篇-02

#69 冷冽篇-03

#70 冷冽篇-04

#71 冷冽篇-05

#72 冷冽篇-06

#73 冷冽篇-07

#74 冷冽篇-08

#75 冷冽篇-09

#76 冷冽篇-10

#77 冷冽篇-11

#78 冷冽篇-12

#79 冷冽篇-13

#80 冷冽篇-14

#81 冷冽篇-終

#82 冷冽篇-終-續

#83 裏篇-創挑彙整區

#84 校祭篇-01

#85 校祭篇-02

#86 校祭篇-03

#87 校祭篇-04

#88 【創挑】校祭創挑宣傳

#89 校祭篇-05

#90 校祭篇-06

#91 校祭篇-07

#92 校祭篇-08

#93 校祭篇-09

#94 校祭篇-10

#95 校祭篇-11-上

#96 校祭篇-11-下

#97 校祭篇-12-上

#98 校祭篇-12-下

#99 校祭篇-13

#100 校祭篇-14

#101 校祭篇-15

#102 校祭篇-16

#103 校祭篇-17

#104 校祭篇-18

#105 【活動】萬聖節！（已結束）

#106 校祭篇-19

#107 校祭篇-20

#108 番外跨年篇（付費文）

#109 番外跨年篇試讀版

#110 校祭篇-21

#111 校祭篇-22

#112 【意見詢問】

#113 校祭篇-23

#114 校祭篇-24

#115 校祭篇-25

#116 校祭篇-26

#117 【公告】修訂版

#118 校祭篇-27

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