Hi, readers! I hope you like my story. It was actually a story I wrote at the summer after-school writing camp at BRWI - a school that my parents own. I polished it up and hope that you guys like it. It's a pretty short story, too. If you guys don't like it, I'm really sorry. I know that I'm not the best of writer's out there, and I probably won't be. And I get that. But I try my best, and it is my writing that I'm putting out there. My ideas and my heart that I'm putting into words. So I just ask that you guys keep your complaints and criticisms to yourself. However, if any of you have suggestions to make it better, I'm all ears and will gladly accept your advice. Please comment and tell me what I should do to make it better and what you like about it (if you do, haha) Thank you and I hope you enjoy the story.
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