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稍微看了下这本佩姬713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkJw7dZCb6d
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkcHjeDmznP
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBTnsWlWhu4
现世一堆东西713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz4Ig5vpWNX
其实就很简单一个道理713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWradTn0Rw9
主角想要被爱713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwrar3qISDj
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女主伊莎爱713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyR4ZcR3N4b
主角就爱回去713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNR3LuUNdMv
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgzAh2P5Deq
想要被爱是佩姬的主题713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDfiIgzYGbc
主角性别不是问题713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZd9PEAZJKe
内心冲突不是问题713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmFYoOlPhNl
主角被爱就迎刃而解713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy0oeDXstjb
看不懂这点整部书就看不了713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5QejFo57Vj
妳的书乏人问津是这道理713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ41gNWKRFa6
作者妳说主角口是心非713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHHusblHjVM
欸我说这不对713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡROox52XbN6
这明摆着口非心也非713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnwrT3ZEz7l
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCDg0Htrayx
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBgSTbx4TMY
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcWd4cdq6dA
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdxj6eAYtoT
为了被爱713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJt7D90LsDW
连原本的性别都不要了713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG2q45C0Dxd
这主角疯的傻的713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgZn3fgsflr
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUTNRXauQx0
女主伊莎713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡokNe4wNJN8
单纯的色鬼713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlHSlDAAIaM
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUcOXdxmLq2
黑化可能
艾德兰713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzV6BspkIiE
可怜虫阿713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZOz7ixo4y7
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpg6UYJr9Jo
妳说解释不够713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwHo7s6hC1i
我到觉得清楚713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgUrU8Jbyge
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhypMu9VC8i
他为啥强713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjqWZizV8DU
妳啥都没讲713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUA6OU0mMUL
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxfjlI0GOoL
也是除主角外最明白的角色713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfuHKx2phTq
她就拿来爱主角的713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSDE2VDwHDO
功能性角色
还有其他许多713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwyypJEkiNw
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtOiuH6FgL9
可以瞧见妳的苦心713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfmikFGxJC1
我觉得这没必要713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6htxjDS4Wg
好的台词提一次够了713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR9haNbGahH
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTZ2vQhNMMS
我倒嫌设定囉嗦713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnthaImtmyA
空白很重要713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi5VLQGYJd9
没明白有没明白的好处713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDaRDPhGKWk
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBSHm57gOJS
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrrJsiO5eit
我还会继续看的713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKC8ZiQLpZQ
确实好看713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6PnSG7gEKN
希望你这能写完713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsRyTFtI4ZC
能放上起点不713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb6ySvo9eh3
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsBtyvaVfXy
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmLDHvnKGXM
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNjmEcRtxy1
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtOY6AfZiBE
感謝你的評文713Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeA3c1oPUJJ
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