作者妳好700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC15njg04Pi
受到妳的邀请700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0mSHuVbLW4
稍微看了下这本佩姬700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXx8ytSHrwc
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzrbaBR3C3L
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrgiDv8xpr8
现世一堆东西700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq30qXlFIDU
其实就很简单一个道理700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsXZOvqSHqO
主角想要被爱700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡido4cfITMi
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3TGfrPmaXl
男主卢克爱700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt3As5MKj8E
主角就爱回去700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbHBybLHV0x
女主伊莎爱700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFufTNhJUOO
主角就爱回去700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRZ6wfvzlVS
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCVFOoyqdJN
想要被爱是佩姬的主题700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwOTtZGcgk0
主角性别不是问题700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1Nu6OSWgIN
内心冲突不是问题700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0ff6ZVxwY1
主角被爱就迎刃而解700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJt9jxBqWlM
看不懂这点整部书就看不了700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl9WmCtc4eF
妳的书乏人问津是这道理700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo6lqd0DfTs
作者妳说主角口是心非700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV6HtWYDHUJ
欸我说这不对700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3EAU8iW033
这明摆着口非心也非700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1dOJnaHoFX
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGDY8QUcoDV
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj85UtSFghs
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6HCqUctD3S
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9JGHO4rgeY
为了被爱700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqB7pfVMxCN
连原本的性别都不要了700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmZ4GR3yXGt
这主角疯的傻的700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi2ndfA5KPC
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYLyxigK9sT
女主伊莎700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwwnomKjuyQ
单纯的色鬼700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFn97MKG5US
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuf7eO3Sp8N
黑化可能
艾德兰700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWTGGU62Gjm
可怜虫阿700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZqEPUD2en9
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf6uhPJQcm8
妳说解释不够700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy5ic17XH5r
我到觉得清楚700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlO5V6IvSZL
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrEopcxZhkn
他为啥强700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ62k0XKHtMp
妳啥都没讲700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7FoInCbaQg
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL6Iyjbkczl
也是除主角外最明白的角色700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL2K7JmJ3mJ
她就拿来爱主角的700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBprNGDL7tX
功能性角色
还有其他许多700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbGOiQosnv5
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnrErnryyyo
可以瞧见妳的苦心700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz203BZMOrm
我觉得这没必要700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs1fTlSX34l
好的台词提一次够了700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNYVC6XVGDE
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhvHDcityy2
我倒嫌设定囉嗦700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe7D06TUOA2
空白很重要700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiGQji19MYe
没明白有没明白的好处700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNw7gSZ6muF
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJRCABcpahd
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLFObbtLR3D
我还会继续看的700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGdltI2z0Qp
确实好看700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxf3ZSTrXOp
希望你这能写完700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6QzMQf6ovt
能放上起点不700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHDT007vXwV
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXheZX8t1Pm
作者回應：700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDP17xrfTvK
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrNozv4L9tw
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡarNSKmfIyy
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGh5nSwaXvz
感謝你的評文700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzjQrllsoBV
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