作者妳好700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6EUtP2OWxL
受到妳的邀请700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJEHKvb1uIF
稍微看了下这本佩姬700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1Nfr6jPQak
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzWEFQEg88u
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9WZUOmj3nV
现世一堆东西700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡILtauhbv6w
其实就很简单一个道理700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw5c9vOls2y
主角想要被爱700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFnh8ysLu7f
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVrR1ixYQ7V
男主卢克爱700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrctZxAckkG
主角就爱回去700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOEbgi8RMh2
女主伊莎爱700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuJ88TFtjT4
主角就爱回去700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxXwvMtytm9
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgzBLMih2t5
想要被爱是佩姬的主题700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrGCWnxpqIX
主角性别不是问题700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQtE9yCl3yf
内心冲突不是问题700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8nUtH2G4RX
主角被爱就迎刃而解700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnHBTn2bws0
看不懂这点整部书就看不了700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4gLWi4up35
妳的书乏人问津是这道理700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpmnoxX3dio
作者妳说主角口是心非700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4cT7cwoQQO
欸我说这不对700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv2h9jF6bnf
这明摆着口非心也非700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBmtELQwEI0
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡradlGYp4Wl
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxHD3n7Bby0
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsVAffnYKIZ
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ34s4ZULyKi
为了被爱700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV1FOz3iR2J
连原本的性别都不要了700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOD5a7JTnIV
这主角疯的傻的700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvSnd5r6y7s
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3OxVoUnKBK
女主伊莎700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZRinKpjoD0
单纯的色鬼700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6SRsDAK9Ac
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeAvXcyKn3w
黑化可能
艾德兰700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqL1AN5TVyb
可怜虫阿700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzlB6MghqR5
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOdMrJSNaGw
妳说解释不够700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0uIwGkDOgm
我到觉得清楚700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpuQA4wcdbu
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEAeOQKLsxF
他为啥强700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWUUfJOr72i
妳啥都没讲700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCHUKs8b7n8
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbKmxQjeu0Z
也是除主角外最明白的角色700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgRZJk6cfeo
她就拿来爱主角的700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFREV70jzYJ
功能性角色
还有其他许多700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9AxpCexUoB
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrWh9zY4VCY
可以瞧见妳的苦心700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8HoTi0y4jk
我觉得这没必要700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDxiyKEPcj8
好的台词提一次够了700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEIkxosIv4F
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOwrVftX5r9
我倒嫌设定囉嗦700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZfrnq0xRxs
空白很重要700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuFjWMPO6cN
没明白有没明白的好处700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIeyWyfkb7s
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtIOr9kpsfv
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK8CT4avS4n
我还会继续看的700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUNkpdmmc7h
确实好看700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxDmbI6jZaU
希望你这能写完700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfes1TO6ZAj
能放上起点不700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIUJOsDhNY1
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjiMgIJ6Lus
作者回應：700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrnu5NREl5b
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDWPfBEW2EO
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNg5A4Ti91J
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAGNxRNkLGr
感謝你的評文700Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNucis3IZsU
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