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受到妳的邀请690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoa5W2LqUyB
稍微看了下这本佩姬690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUJtzsGuhQv
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKZZT96yiRD
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3P0Rvawb1G
现世一堆东西690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKI5aEeEKjC
其实就很简单一个道理690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcKYkuXfG1m
主角想要被爱690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ5woEIgdRb
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3U3p10QhnY
男主卢克爱690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCIE1w3oCpm
主角就爱回去690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM8fziMXorg
女主伊莎爱690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNncNTx7UhF
主角就爱回去690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk4l3gK4D0I
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7QhQ0rDoAV
想要被爱是佩姬的主题690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3MhnfzJyGY
主角性别不是问题690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs0ZbEn5Cdt
内心冲突不是问题690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrgPHYbbdme
主角被爱就迎刃而解690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1jALYypj1R
看不懂这点整部书就看不了690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW0tqj2SAzY
妳的书乏人问津是这道理690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0KAAB3htC9
作者妳说主角口是心非690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZYOWv1KWCx
欸我说这不对690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbTr4QoUgg5
这明摆着口非心也非690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK9JFvAR27q
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJA4xmzBZIV
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ90zItbGnxf
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡliFPQSprxK
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmlWdcnvYTk
为了被爱690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtKmka7LelI
连原本的性别都不要了690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡusLqGvM650
这主角疯的傻的690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrttH3GojOS
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWyqcM1X4ZX
女主伊莎690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy23smLhrTB
单纯的色鬼690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8Pr6Kh2oGt
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhby9JN5wL9
黑化可能
艾德兰690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHUr9pGnwZX
可怜虫阿690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMGHzzqr1v0
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡruEH5EESIg
妳说解释不够690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiO6Ldv2H6n
我到觉得清楚690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4tRqs6MkIS
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFu9Ocmisy8
他为啥强690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtlGvkK7Xvi
妳啥都没讲690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡidbpZK5UVV
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNcVeNZemfC
也是除主角外最明白的角色690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSowxdmJKyX
她就拿来爱主角的690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8TH92WWyeW
功能性角色
还有其他许多690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIFRZIDTsXB
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡppzUKc9uPc
可以瞧见妳的苦心690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGwYbMjfIuQ
我觉得这没必要690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIeZ1YV01lP
好的台词提一次够了690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhUg68wRWco
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa2GQZmMLtZ
我倒嫌设定囉嗦690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwL5UlaVFSm
空白很重要690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFQUnmtZMxp
没明白有没明白的好处690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtZAsD8oWxB
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDlYesIuUIg
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzRymph3mEO
我还会继续看的690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLAnQqyHHei
确实好看690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2uNWK25ArB
希望你这能写完690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFDLQn0CqEN
能放上起点不690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiv91yswM7O
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqXG545Vcbv
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBChcGZtZqj
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1IM8y1HufH
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRstM4e5Uz8
感謝你的評文690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpA4QKm71zW
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