作者妳好700Please respect copyright.PENANA6EUtP2OWxL
受到妳的邀请700Please respect copyright.PENANAJEHKvb1uIF
稍微看了下这本佩姬700Please respect copyright.PENANA1Nfr6jPQak
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法700Please respect copyright.PENANAzWEFQEg88u
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西700Please respect copyright.PENANA9WZUOmj3nV
现世一堆东西700Please respect copyright.PENANAILtauhbv6w
其实就很简单一个道理700Please respect copyright.PENANAw5c9vOls2y
主角想要被爱700Please respect copyright.PENANAFnh8ysLu7f
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱700Please respect copyright.PENANAVrR1ixYQ7V
男主卢克爱700Please respect copyright.PENANArctZxAckkG
主角就爱回去700Please respect copyright.PENANAOEbgi8RMh2
女主伊莎爱700Please respect copyright.PENANAuJ88TFtjT4
主角就爱回去700Please respect copyright.PENANAxXwvMtytm9
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理700Please respect copyright.PENANAgzBLMih2t5
想要被爱是佩姬的主题700Please respect copyright.PENANArGCWnxpqIX
主角性别不是问题700Please respect copyright.PENANAQtE9yCl3yf
内心冲突不是问题700Please respect copyright.PENANA8nUtH2G4RX
主角被爱就迎刃而解700Please respect copyright.PENANAnHBTn2bws0
看不懂这点整部书就看不了700Please respect copyright.PENANA4gLWi4up35
妳的书乏人问津是这道理700Please respect copyright.PENANApmnoxX3dio
作者妳说主角口是心非700Please respect copyright.PENANA4cT7cwoQQO
欸我说这不对700Please respect copyright.PENANAv2h9jF6bnf
这明摆着口非心也非700Please respect copyright.PENANABmtELQwEI0
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰700Please respect copyright.PENANAradlGYp4Wl
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵700Please respect copyright.PENANAxHD3n7Bby0
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜700Please respect copyright.PENANAsVAffnYKIZ
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的700Please respect copyright.PENANA34s4ZULyKi
为了被爱700Please respect copyright.PENANAV1FOz3iR2J
连原本的性别都不要了700Please respect copyright.PENANAOD5a7JTnIV
这主角疯的傻的700Please respect copyright.PENANAvSnd5r6y7s
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色700Please respect copyright.PENANA3OxVoUnKBK
女主伊莎700Please respect copyright.PENANAZRinKpjoD0
单纯的色鬼700Please respect copyright.PENANA6SRsDAK9Ac
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性700Please respect copyright.PENANAeAvXcyKn3w
黑化可能
艾德兰700Please respect copyright.PENANAqL1AN5TVyb
可怜虫阿700Please respect copyright.PENANAzlB6MghqR5
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了700Please respect copyright.PENANAOdMrJSNaGw
妳说解释不够700Please respect copyright.PENANA0uIwGkDOgm
我到觉得清楚700Please respect copyright.PENANApuQA4wcdbu
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够700Please respect copyright.PENANAEAeOQKLsxF
他为啥强700Please respect copyright.PENANAWUUfJOr72i
妳啥都没讲700Please respect copyright.PENANACHUKs8b7n8
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白700Please respect copyright.PENANAbKmxQjeu0Z
也是除主角外最明白的角色700Please respect copyright.PENANAgRZJk6cfeo
她就拿来爱主角的700Please respect copyright.PENANAFREV70jzYJ
功能性角色
还有其他许多700Please respect copyright.PENANA9AxpCexUoB
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多700Please respect copyright.PENANArWh9zY4VCY
可以瞧见妳的苦心700Please respect copyright.PENANA8HoTi0y4jk
我觉得这没必要700Please respect copyright.PENANADxiyKEPcj8
好的台词提一次够了700Please respect copyright.PENANAEIkxosIv4F
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨700Please respect copyright.PENANAOwrVftX5r9
我倒嫌设定囉嗦700Please respect copyright.PENANAZfrnq0xRxs
空白很重要700Please respect copyright.PENANAuFjWMPO6cN
没明白有没明白的好处700Please respect copyright.PENANAIeyWyfkb7s
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说700Please respect copyright.PENANAtIOr9kpsfv
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书700Please respect copyright.PENANAK8CT4avS4n
我还会继续看的700Please respect copyright.PENANAUNkpdmmc7h
确实好看700Please respect copyright.PENANAxDmbI6jZaU
希望你这能写完700Please respect copyright.PENANAfes1TO6ZAj
能放上起点不700Please respect copyright.PENANAIUJOsDhNY1
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
700Please respect copyright.PENANAjiMgIJ6Lus
作者回應:700Please respect copyright.PENANArnu5NREl5b
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,700Please respect copyright.PENANADWPfBEW2EO
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,700Please respect copyright.PENANANg5A4Ti91J
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞700Please respect copyright.PENANAAGNxRNkLGr
感謝你的評文700Please respect copyright.PENANANucis3IZsU
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