感謝各位的投稿!304Please respect copyright.PENANADrkmA5Pe5Y
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!304Please respect copyright.PENANAc4YYAZexVI
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~304Please respect copyright.PENANANL2qauEchV
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法304Please respect copyright.PENANAVrhcoeocYa
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!304Please respect copyright.PENANAAiPqMLywbb
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!304Please respect copyright.PENANAsid2UXKeT3
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》304Please respect copyright.PENANAGSsE7KD5YA
(兼人氣獎得主)304Please respect copyright.PENANAqFpHG9gAnB
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD304Please respect copyright.PENANA7gw9er2Vbt
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W304Please respect copyright.PENANA2y0DBfT9hL
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!304Please respect copyright.PENANAUxFEWo9Hyx
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」304Please respect copyright.PENANAj8PSK4vUH9
結果後續結尾意外二連發!304Please respect copyright.PENANA5BBifKQI7K
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意304Please respect copyright.PENANAIbBGF1lF0X
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺304Please respect copyright.PENANAYaDPKr7SBi
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事304Please respect copyright.PENANAEnBy7PlmWi
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》304Please respect copyright.PENANALKDZcjnClr
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD304Please respect copyright.PENANAFRVdaHhdsK
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯304Please respect copyright.PENANAksMipfTs7B
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣304Please respect copyright.PENANAliZnQRNkoG
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD304Please respect copyright.PENANAg4GWUtNSSG
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~304Please respect copyright.PENANAfvI3fYZnyQ
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?304Please respect copyright.PENANAT6eTLoy9Ti
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文304Please respect copyright.PENANAnbSfazSoww
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:304Please respect copyright.PENANAVVvrijKm4j
這個名次是最難抉擇的304Please respect copyright.PENANASRdnAqrAZQ
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態304Please respect copyright.PENANAerdBjuAJFm
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧304Please respect copyright.PENANA8Iv66I86FU
以發佈順序點評:304Please respect copyright.PENANAeewh7XfTRv
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》304Please respect copyright.PENANAaaa0CRn7GY
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底304Please respect copyright.PENANArpJ7Bsxopj
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END304Please respect copyright.PENANA4fcBQhgqYn
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺304Please respect copyright.PENANAe4Ls4BXFCU
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案304Please respect copyright.PENANAmh2ZmUEE9T
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w304Please respect copyright.PENANA0wXRmwC11Q
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖304Please respect copyright.PENANArIwSg8eDXf
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到304Please respect copyright.PENANAvECdWbRvd3
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》304Please respect copyright.PENANAYXdBeCDfpP
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!304Please respect copyright.PENANA97fcfxglji
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點304Please respect copyright.PENANAjOc9vc18o2
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD304Please respect copyright.PENANAm5PUc4IJ9a
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)304Please respect copyright.PENANAvz9HthiNTm
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒304Please respect copyright.PENANAXRNITImY9S
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚304Please respect copyright.PENANAkIFMTv0qCm
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失304Please respect copyright.PENANA8jCts40pEF
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了304Please respect copyright.PENANAo7IiOjQanZ
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性304Please respect copyright.PENANAhb0Gl33e22
例如:304Please respect copyright.PENANAGGgcjAIpfy
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢304Please respect copyright.PENANAc9BWpNbPNk
>放學忘記去放乖乖304Please respect copyright.PENANA8FV2TIsiMs
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂304Please respect copyright.PENANAj4AfadJPgN
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些304Please respect copyright.PENANA4OHEVaFU2X
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性304Please respect copyright.PENANAiarwIar8Pb
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》304Please respect copyright.PENANAY4wK75Yit1
宛如聊齋的古風故事304Please respect copyright.PENANAOLKpYmAzr7
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?304Please respect copyright.PENANAOIqg4c7boS
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋304Please respect copyright.PENANA2R6CtAVOYp
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)304Please respect copyright.PENANAtdE3tJCMsL
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?304Please respect copyright.PENANA4fFD4iBObd
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度304Please respect copyright.PENANAT3ZlQMRzlQ
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD304Please respect copyright.PENANAbPKDabIS6C
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌304Please respect copyright.PENANAXIO3lITCB1
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了304Please respect copyright.PENANAwatrrt7yWI
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞304Please respect copyright.PENANA1lWTafnEG2
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間304Please respect copyright.PENANADLGiYS1CyB
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠304Please respect copyright.PENANATuentzKj1m
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖304Please respect copyright.PENANAsBqRsnjl4e
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒304Please respect copyright.PENANAlBBRKLjmkU
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說304Please respect copyright.PENANAmBXRqSV7D1
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》304Please respect copyright.PENANAKRnLLTyTl6
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞304Please respect copyright.PENANAnaFaY4KNrk
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!