感謝各位的投稿!317Please respect copyright.PENANAJZzSmvz3IC
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!317Please respect copyright.PENANADjegRLAdyb
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~317Please respect copyright.PENANAI7FlxBRXfd
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法317Please respect copyright.PENANAShVTr7AfZG
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!317Please respect copyright.PENANACiP9SzbT3v
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!317Please respect copyright.PENANA3wb66Ioowa
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》317Please respect copyright.PENANATsQFGHFltw
(兼人氣獎得主)317Please respect copyright.PENANA7HoA9TYtlX
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD317Please respect copyright.PENANAocJltHExJq
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W317Please respect copyright.PENANA8mzGGUWwUa
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!317Please respect copyright.PENANAYqr9SQdwEb
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」317Please respect copyright.PENANAgE0c9VZR4S
結果後續結尾意外二連發!317Please respect copyright.PENANATwXK4R4McG
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意317Please respect copyright.PENANAcBfOQ3wI2W
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺317Please respect copyright.PENANAwhW3zjfb8n
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事317Please respect copyright.PENANAJG7vaUgWzb
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》317Please respect copyright.PENANAImiIlF9KSY
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD317Please respect copyright.PENANAUdzeCOnSvD
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯317Please respect copyright.PENANAVA2TPFOz0N
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣317Please respect copyright.PENANAf0LiM0XHkg
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD317Please respect copyright.PENANAjGYK14aYJe
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~317Please respect copyright.PENANASEoBHfiDh1
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?317Please respect copyright.PENANAJeNKN4QBm6
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文317Please respect copyright.PENANAZER2Db9Gpb
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:317Please respect copyright.PENANAAwlKpCgizX
這個名次是最難抉擇的317Please respect copyright.PENANAL0RebpMv60
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態317Please respect copyright.PENANATw85uhWDpw
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧317Please respect copyright.PENANAPehIbcdBti
以發佈順序點評:317Please respect copyright.PENANAMAJf2lLZbE
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》317Please respect copyright.PENANAfZ9BxFo2TF
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底317Please respect copyright.PENANATcmQzjhTJL
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END317Please respect copyright.PENANAv4OYj5Hkfv
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺317Please respect copyright.PENANAPb2qcEsMTR
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案317Please respect copyright.PENANAWB0VqQ0KAm
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w317Please respect copyright.PENANArGcjcV37dn
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖317Please respect copyright.PENANAfYKvNdivLC
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到317Please respect copyright.PENANA5UIdFytggs
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》317Please respect copyright.PENANANUHeJk474Y
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!317Please respect copyright.PENANA7lcccA9hVO
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點317Please respect copyright.PENANAJukCj4XUya
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD317Please respect copyright.PENANAOM1TJ3hDKG
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)317Please respect copyright.PENANAI5wJtbCua2
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒317Please respect copyright.PENANAOaGSGxrVrd
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚317Please respect copyright.PENANAHCXvAOTxTt
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失317Please respect copyright.PENANAd9LauLOc4I
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了317Please respect copyright.PENANA0JryfQpP1Y
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性317Please respect copyright.PENANAi4RaMeQPqW
例如:317Please respect copyright.PENANApsM1Cr8gnD
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢317Please respect copyright.PENANAs9hlJYEbab
>放學忘記去放乖乖317Please respect copyright.PENANApye6lWLY3N
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂317Please respect copyright.PENANAerhanGWz7W
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些317Please respect copyright.PENANADwjEfWWSJO
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性317Please respect copyright.PENANA45BKCKZuJf
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》317Please respect copyright.PENANAu7CCRRdU0B
宛如聊齋的古風故事317Please respect copyright.PENANAb4jPmFQdXT
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?317Please respect copyright.PENANAsmxVlEtzLV
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋317Please respect copyright.PENANAtfRiXVI9Sw
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)317Please respect copyright.PENANABnRPP5GJZv
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?317Please respect copyright.PENANAgosqOV5Qol
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度317Please respect copyright.PENANAYE4VG59OMZ
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD317Please respect copyright.PENANAnydlx321yS
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌317Please respect copyright.PENANAVJKS6GQqWq
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了317Please respect copyright.PENANAeLgbVRnAbM
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞317Please respect copyright.PENANAIKcQqp8YOF
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間317Please respect copyright.PENANAVKpnek6l09
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠317Please respect copyright.PENANAMX6K2TWr9O
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖317Please respect copyright.PENANAWVTs6B1Zev
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒317Please respect copyright.PENANALfH0uJM2jD
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說317Please respect copyright.PENANAd3yrze8H25
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》317Please respect copyright.PENANABdGUXMMIey
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞317Please respect copyright.PENANAn0F1Eo3D2e
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!