感謝各位的投稿!357Please respect copyright.PENANAwfT330RB7o
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!357Please respect copyright.PENANA2IQlWgWSeB
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~357Please respect copyright.PENANAzeMSp1Y5Nc
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法357Please respect copyright.PENANAdzrRaiJbYP
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!357Please respect copyright.PENANAHHURqED9jZ
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!357Please respect copyright.PENANAVpkZk6xWUF
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》357Please respect copyright.PENANAvmTTKanV0p
(兼人氣獎得主)357Please respect copyright.PENANAPYO59f1Rbw
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD357Please respect copyright.PENANAnyrraaybSw
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W357Please respect copyright.PENANAFyGmu40Q7k
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!357Please respect copyright.PENANAhz4gpla6fv
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」357Please respect copyright.PENANAYqjhcn1MPj
結果後續結尾意外二連發!357Please respect copyright.PENANAcl07iGHx7N
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意357Please respect copyright.PENANAJKmA9kJD9Q
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺357Please respect copyright.PENANAuwIwnR8WCT
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事357Please respect copyright.PENANAk5CicHnGLS
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》357Please respect copyright.PENANAmVpAIkjbOu
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD357Please respect copyright.PENANAnqYvI8m5YL
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯357Please respect copyright.PENANA0yU85OjkbJ
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣357Please respect copyright.PENANAPvVY8aIel5
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD357Please respect copyright.PENANAE6y4ApHexB
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~357Please respect copyright.PENANAoYrP3K06c1
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?357Please respect copyright.PENANA6S0FtayYGd
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文357Please respect copyright.PENANAfaUmeXz9Yh
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:357Please respect copyright.PENANAfSQKRzIwNz
這個名次是最難抉擇的357Please respect copyright.PENANAjIKsCbIcAs
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態357Please respect copyright.PENANApf2b1XiGaj
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧357Please respect copyright.PENANAhkecIifGW2
以發佈順序點評:357Please respect copyright.PENANAPMBwQB1mmo
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》357Please respect copyright.PENANAWLnFc5IsFA
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底357Please respect copyright.PENANAY6yEHWuxa8
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END357Please respect copyright.PENANAOAlE5B3zf4
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺357Please respect copyright.PENANAQLkCIBNcVD
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案357Please respect copyright.PENANA3vBTOJNbXm
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w357Please respect copyright.PENANAGG8cqnRGDW
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖357Please respect copyright.PENANA95EtWe6i5J
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到357Please respect copyright.PENANAEIikwtt6bN
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》357Please respect copyright.PENANAddaCtqyL5l
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!357Please respect copyright.PENANAMkTCC7jvPk
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點357Please respect copyright.PENANANo7iLkHTBw
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD357Please respect copyright.PENANAVTmMrB7o2l
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)357Please respect copyright.PENANASKI481W3uN
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒357Please respect copyright.PENANAfF9iULhQja
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚357Please respect copyright.PENANAAYfGzhSeEP
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失357Please respect copyright.PENANAkPPQIUzePD
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了357Please respect copyright.PENANA9peL5LfCuZ
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性357Please respect copyright.PENANA8smey4mSly
例如:357Please respect copyright.PENANAYl6c2Zm0Wt
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢357Please respect copyright.PENANAAiG90MVk7G
>放學忘記去放乖乖357Please respect copyright.PENANAFWA3au2C6E
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂357Please respect copyright.PENANAVVf0WWbz2k
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些357Please respect copyright.PENANASiNHptLYB7
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性357Please respect copyright.PENANAxPINEZsxUr
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》357Please respect copyright.PENANADpfGs9ICqR
宛如聊齋的古風故事357Please respect copyright.PENANAA9MHPM91Vp
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?357Please respect copyright.PENANAEur37KLRGM
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋357Please respect copyright.PENANAB28IwHCiRH
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)357Please respect copyright.PENANA19igewTvy8
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?357Please respect copyright.PENANAln7u7LRpbT
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度357Please respect copyright.PENANAKKz5Ol2r4K
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD357Please respect copyright.PENANAcnHjH0ZIVB
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌357Please respect copyright.PENANALUHZ8jnOpZ
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了357Please respect copyright.PENANAc0MV2voKwH
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞357Please respect copyright.PENANAIqpLFg7VSu
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間357Please respect copyright.PENANAmDgVoZH31P
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠357Please respect copyright.PENANAHCXhQr3sbL
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖357Please respect copyright.PENANAK0hWYk0nv3
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒357Please respect copyright.PENANASuYuIX1jXH
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說357Please respect copyright.PENANATiZpIQBQUK
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》357Please respect copyright.PENANAXCFCeTREH4
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞357Please respect copyright.PENANAVJi2UkndMb
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!