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#12

（範例）很久很久以前

Jan 11, 2022 268 1 Min Read 436 Words
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很久很久以前

可以奔跑在稻田間

很久很久以前

可以望向那海邊

很久很久以前

可以躺在荒野～

很久很久以前

有藍天～

272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVC8QwTs2Zi

很久很久以前

鄰居會聚在一起聊天

很久很久以前

會和朋友走進田

很久很久以前

還有牛肉麵店

很久很久以前

芭樂會在樹間

好甜

272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmUX6T30mdo

突然間

村莊變成公寓又變成水泥叢林

房價一直在漲我們買不起

被房東收走的牛肉麵店

大家開始與家鄉分離

272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiXaouSfmHL

突然間

稻田都變成一格格小房間

小房間不會互相連線

海邊被一格格小房間擋在外面

荒野變成了公園

砍掉芭樂樹準備建更多的房間

272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDTw28LCWoD

突然間

大家都盯著手機畫面

都顧著上網與網友連線

觀察著社群軟體的 留言

都沒人注意到

空氣變得不再香甜

大樓正一步步的遮住藍天

272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEyckRdOSG9

曾經以前

可以奔跑在稻田間

曾經以前

可以望向那海邊

曾經以前

可以躺在荒野～

曾經以前

有藍天～

272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6Igspm4HyR

曾經以前

鄰居會聚在一起聊天

曾經以前

會和朋友走進田

曾經以前

還有牛肉麵店

曾經以前

芭樂會在樹間

好甜

272Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF71TED6mbT

就這樣一天一天

星期一到星期天

重複了幾次

又過了一個月

時間不斷不斷在改變

只有藍天

依然看得見

這是一個沒發表的作品，書名是：remember

簡單解析一下歌詞，其實也不難看出是在講都市發展後，我們可能遺忘的東西

15.158.61.20

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