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別慌!我有地圖
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#1
這穿越太沒誠意了
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#2
別管三七二十一,先去冒險吧
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#3
人緣好就能快速上位
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#4
開掛的時間到了?
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#5
說好的開掛呢?
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#6
這到底是什麼人,作者你就不能說清楚一點嗎?
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#7
這下史萊姆要被滅族了吧
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#8
主腳你別亂來
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2 Comments
#9
NPC別搶對白好嗎?
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#10
穿越者就是該一個接一個才熱鬧的嘛
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168 Reads
0 Comments
#11
有地圖怎麼給你安排遭遇戰呢?
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164 Reads
0 Comments
#12
該去的地方還是得去一趟
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#13
國際慣例,主角一定不可以是最帥的人
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152 Reads
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#14
Hello,魔化教堂
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#15
勞工法例,主角也要休假了
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#16
GM一般不會殺人的吧?
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#17
畫風突變,變成武俠小説了
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#18
反派也要吃飯的嘛
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#19
又是睜開眼睛的時候了
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#20
這兩章讓我偷個懶之其一
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#21
這兩章讓我偷個懶之其二
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#22
會不會有點太沉重了呢?
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#23
覺悟
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#24
終於可以開掛闖迷宮了吧
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#25
為什麼打架偏要在屋頂?
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#26
主角的位置我拿走了
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#27
未滿十八者慎入(笑)
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#28
富家子弟必須姓蔣
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#29
現在才來搞個系統介紹
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#30
人家第一章就做的事你竟然能拖到三十章
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#31
有人投訴美女太少了
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#32
不管做了什麼事美女總是值得原諒的
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#33
選對隊員很重要
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122 Reads
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#34
不太想告訴你這章是說什麼的
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#35
看你這拖拖拉拉的我也想發脾氣了
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#36
一號
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#37
房間
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#38
第一條命
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#39
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#40
那人
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#41
遠行有時
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#42
狂戰士
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#43
真正的主角?
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#44
相聚有時
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#45
好好坐穩了
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#46
蝴蝶
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#47
雨時
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#48
琛藏不露(一)
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#49
琛藏不露(二)
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#50
方向
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#51
為了滿足中二的自己
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#52
再不當下英雄收視率要降到零了
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#53
還有讀者記得這人是誰嗎?
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#54
胖子的故事
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#55
棄明投暗
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#56
今天才知道可以沒有章節標題的,害我花這麼多時間去想
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#57
但為了統一格式還是給她個標題吧
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#58
你們在哪裏啊喵
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#59
交戰(一)
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#60
交戰(二)
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#61
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#62
喂!你很臭呀!
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#63
每個男人心中都有一個沉睡的龍陽君
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#64
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#65
明火煮食樂趣多
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#66
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#67
無敵
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#68
屠宰場
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#69
欠揍的人vs欠揍的人
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#70
哎呀!主腳又得受皮肉之苦了!
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#71
已死之人和將死之人
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#72
騙案受害人的心路歷程
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#73
反派的肺腑之言
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#74
好難寫啊.....
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#75
這周算是乖乖更新了
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#76
我就說我才比較適合當主角
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131 Reads
0 Comments
#77
作了七十多個標題的我已經江郎才盡了
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#78
殞落
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#79
便當不宜多發
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#80
雨時、雨時
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#81
登登登凳
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#82
該走的終歸要走
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0 Comments
#83
作者忘記輸入標題了
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#84
光陰似箭日月如梭....呵欠.....
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#85
待辦事項減一
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#86
你有你的生活,我有我的忙碌
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#87
任性與自由
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#88
語言藝術
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#89
行為藝術
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#90
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#91
白衣人
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#92
選擇困難症
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#93
別告訴別人,這是我們的秘密基地
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#94
下場
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#95
過去將來式
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#96
偷窺狂與渣女
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#97
和平的後宮是不可能存在的
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#98
貓和老鼠
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#99
冇鬼用啊你
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#100
無可救藥
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#101
變身是每個男人的夢想
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#102
不雪白的胸部
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#103
唉唉唉唉
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色色的劇情
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#105
老師說跑題不要太過份
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#106
明月幾時有
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#107
「入世」未深
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#108
這回GG了
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#109
別慌!我會變身
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#110
別慌!我會變身!(二)
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#111
活着多好
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#112
老虎和病貓
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#113
環境保護,人人有責
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#114
我很弱但我收o靚
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#115
作者要講耶穌了
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#116
忠誠可升可跌,投資要謹慎
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#117
Issue 117
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#118
因為上一章沒有標題還是有人看而沾沾自喜的作者終於更新了
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#119
人物介紹
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#120
道與業
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#121
時間與空間
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#122
夢遊
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#123
真他媽感人的重逢
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#124
爽文必須有蕭凡
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#125
不等價交換
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迷則信
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#127
7/0/0
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#128
叛變
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#129
在座的各位都是垃圾
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#130
我要打十個
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#131
鬼與佛
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#132
連、鎖
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這是一部異世界的穿越小說,但是,別妄想看到主角帶着光環開掛升級。

剛來到異世界,不到一天,起步資金便被騙光了。

不要緊,更慘的事還在後頭呢!

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這部小說,我希望讀者在讀的時候,會對各種和人類有關的事作出反思,當然,這目標對我這新手來說大概定得有點高。

但不管這部小說大家覺得寫得好與不好、喜歡還是不喜歡,我還是很認真地看待她的。在寫的時候,每寫一點,又重頭到尾看一遍,看看有哪些要修改的、哪些應該要刪減增加的,寫到現在,自己卻是從頭到尾看了十多遍。(當然,每次看還是有很多不滿意的地方。)

到今天,寫了四十多章,約二十萬字的時候,才鼓起勇氣來發佈小說,拖了這麼久,有很大的原因是怕自己寫到半路寫不下去,然而,今天即使選擇了發佈,這份憂慮還是一點都沒有消減。但既然問題永遠不會解決,就不如讓它留下來,反正即使我好幾天甚至一個月寫不出一個字來,腦袋卻是沒有放棄思考故事的發展。

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#1
這穿越太沒誠意了
24 Likes
405 Reads
0 Comments
#2
別管三七二十一,先去冒險吧
17 Likes
230 Reads
0 Comments
#3
人緣好就能快速上位
15 Likes
192 Reads
0 Comments
#4
開掛的時間到了?
15 Likes
207 Reads
0 Comments
#5
說好的開掛呢?
8 Likes
180 Reads
0 Comments
#6
這到底是什麼人,作者你就不能說清楚一點嗎?
7 Likes
173 Reads
0 Comments
#7
這下史萊姆要被滅族了吧
8 Likes
186 Reads
0 Comments
#8
主腳你別亂來
6 Likes
150 Reads
2 Comments
#9
NPC別搶對白好嗎?
6 Likes
192 Reads
0 Comments
#10
穿越者就是該一個接一個才熱鬧的嘛
5 Likes
168 Reads
0 Comments
#11
有地圖怎麼給你安排遭遇戰呢?
3 Likes
164 Reads
0 Comments
#12
該去的地方還是得去一趟
3 Likes
159 Reads
0 Comments
#13
國際慣例,主角一定不可以是最帥的人
3 Likes
152 Reads
0 Comments
#14
Hello,魔化教堂
3 Likes
408 Reads
0 Comments
#15
勞工法例,主角也要休假了
4 Likes
169 Reads
0 Comments
#16
GM一般不會殺人的吧?
3 Likes
176 Reads
0 Comments
#17
畫風突變,變成武俠小説了
3 Likes
581 Reads
0 Comments
#18
反派也要吃飯的嘛
2 Likes
170 Reads
0 Comments
#19
又是睜開眼睛的時候了
1 Like
141 Reads
0 Comments
#20
這兩章讓我偷個懶之其一
1 Like
152 Reads
0 Comments
#21
這兩章讓我偷個懶之其二
1 Like
169 Reads
0 Comments
#22
會不會有點太沉重了呢?
1 Like
150 Reads
0 Comments
#23
覺悟
1 Like
141 Reads
0 Comments
#24
終於可以開掛闖迷宮了吧
1 Like
143 Reads
0 Comments
#25
為什麼打架偏要在屋頂?
1 Like
122 Reads
0 Comments
#26
主角的位置我拿走了
1 Like
124 Reads
0 Comments
#27
未滿十八者慎入(笑)
1 Like
143 Reads
0 Comments
#28
富家子弟必須姓蔣
1 Like
160 Reads
0 Comments
#29
現在才來搞個系統介紹
1 Like
146 Reads
0 Comments
#30
人家第一章就做的事你竟然能拖到三十章
0 Likes
140 Reads
0 Comments
#31
有人投訴美女太少了
0 Likes
158 Reads
0 Comments
#32
不管做了什麼事美女總是值得原諒的
0 Likes
120 Reads
0 Comments
#33
選對隊員很重要
0 Likes
122 Reads
0 Comments
#34
不太想告訴你這章是說什麼的
0 Likes
477 Reads
0 Comments
#35
看你這拖拖拉拉的我也想發脾氣了
0 Likes
169 Reads
0 Comments
#36
一號
1 Like
130 Reads
0 Comments
#37
房間
1 Like
136 Reads
0 Comments
#38
第一條命
1 Like
139 Reads
0 Comments
#39
1 Like
151 Reads
0 Comments
#40
那人
1 Like
119 Reads
0 Comments
#41
遠行有時
1 Like
136 Reads
0 Comments
#42
狂戰士
1 Like
137 Reads
0 Comments
#43
真正的主角?
1 Like
147 Reads
0 Comments
#44
相聚有時
1 Like
209 Reads
0 Comments
#45
好好坐穩了
1 Like
135 Reads
0 Comments
#46
蝴蝶
1 Like
131 Reads
0 Comments
#47
雨時
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118 Reads
0 Comments
#48
琛藏不露(一)
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120 Reads
0 Comments
#49
琛藏不露(二)
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0 Comments
#50
方向
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114 Reads
0 Comments
#51
為了滿足中二的自己
0 Likes
113 Reads
0 Comments
#52
再不當下英雄收視率要降到零了
0 Likes
140 Reads
0 Comments
#53
還有讀者記得這人是誰嗎?
0 Likes
134 Reads
0 Comments
#54
胖子的故事
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121 Reads
0 Comments
#55
棄明投暗
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135 Reads
0 Comments
#56
今天才知道可以沒有章節標題的,害我花這麼多時間去想
0 Likes
183 Reads
0 Comments
#57
但為了統一格式還是給她個標題吧
0 Likes
170 Reads
0 Comments
#58
你們在哪裏啊喵
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147 Reads
0 Comments
#59
交戰(一)
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130 Reads
0 Comments
#60
交戰(二)
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109 Reads
0 Comments
#61
0 Likes
104 Reads
0 Comments
#62
喂!你很臭呀!
0 Likes
159 Reads
0 Comments
#63
每個男人心中都有一個沉睡的龍陽君
0 Likes
161 Reads
0 Comments
#64
0 Likes
142 Reads
0 Comments
#65
明火煮食樂趣多
0 Likes
140 Reads
0 Comments
#66
0 Likes
132 Reads
0 Comments
#67
無敵
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121 Reads
0 Comments
#68
屠宰場
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139 Reads
0 Comments
#69
欠揍的人vs欠揍的人
0 Likes
156 Reads
0 Comments
#70
哎呀!主腳又得受皮肉之苦了!
0 Likes
118 Reads
0 Comments
#71
已死之人和將死之人
0 Likes
137 Reads
0 Comments
#72
騙案受害人的心路歷程
0 Likes
117 Reads
0 Comments
#73
反派的肺腑之言
0 Likes
128 Reads
0 Comments
#74
好難寫啊.....
0 Likes
140 Reads
0 Comments
#75
這周算是乖乖更新了
0 Likes
174 Reads
0 Comments
#76
我就說我才比較適合當主角
0 Likes
131 Reads
0 Comments
#77
作了七十多個標題的我已經江郎才盡了
0 Likes
136 Reads
0 Comments
#78
殞落
0 Likes
146 Reads
0 Comments
#79
便當不宜多發
1 Like
166 Reads
1 Comment
#80
雨時、雨時
0 Likes
150 Reads
0 Comments
#81
登登登凳
0 Likes
163 Reads
0 Comments
#82
該走的終歸要走
0 Likes
120 Reads
0 Comments
#83
作者忘記輸入標題了
0 Likes
135 Reads
0 Comments
#84
光陰似箭日月如梭....呵欠.....
0 Likes
141 Reads
0 Comments
#85
待辦事項減一
0 Likes
136 Reads
0 Comments
#86
你有你的生活,我有我的忙碌
0 Likes
113 Reads
0 Comments
#87
任性與自由
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129 Reads
0 Comments
#88
語言藝術
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126 Reads
0 Comments
#89
行為藝術
0 Likes
135 Reads
0 Comments
#90
0 Likes
108 Reads
0 Comments
#91
白衣人
0 Likes
93 Reads
0 Comments
#92
選擇困難症
0 Likes
105 Reads
0 Comments
#93
別告訴別人,這是我們的秘密基地
0 Likes
89 Reads
0 Comments
#94
下場
0 Likes
84 Reads
0 Comments
#95
過去將來式
1 Like
93 Reads
0 Comments
#96
偷窺狂與渣女
0 Likes
114 Reads
0 Comments
#97
和平的後宮是不可能存在的
0 Likes
97 Reads
0 Comments
#98
貓和老鼠
0 Likes
111 Reads
0 Comments
#99
冇鬼用啊你
0 Likes
104 Reads
0 Comments
#100
無可救藥
0 Likes
148 Reads
1 Comment
#101
變身是每個男人的夢想
0 Likes
109 Reads
0 Comments
#102
不雪白的胸部
0 Likes
99 Reads
0 Comments
#103
唉唉唉唉
0 Likes
103 Reads
0 Comments
#104
色色的劇情
0 Likes
97 Reads
0 Comments
#105
老師說跑題不要太過份
0 Likes
126 Reads
0 Comments
#106
明月幾時有
0 Likes
146 Reads
0 Comments
#107
「入世」未深
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#108
這回GG了
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102 Reads
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#109
別慌!我會變身
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103 Reads
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#110
別慌!我會變身!(二)
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112 Reads
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#111
活着多好
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85 Reads
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#112
老虎和病貓
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96 Reads
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#113
環境保護,人人有責
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97 Reads
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#114
我很弱但我收o靚
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109 Reads
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#115
作者要講耶穌了
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140 Reads
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#116
忠誠可升可跌,投資要謹慎
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234 Reads
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#117
Issue 117
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132 Reads
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#118
因為上一章沒有標題還是有人看而沾沾自喜的作者終於更新了
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92 Reads
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#119
人物介紹
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#120
道與業
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87 Reads
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#121
時間與空間
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77 Reads
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#122
夢遊
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72 Reads
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#123
真他媽感人的重逢
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167 Reads
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#124
爽文必須有蕭凡
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57 Reads
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#125
不等價交換
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#126
迷則信
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73 Reads
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#127
7/0/0
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51 Reads
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#128
叛變
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62 Reads
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#129
在座的各位都是垃圾
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#130
我要打十個
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42 Reads
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#131
鬼與佛
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50 Reads
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#132
連、鎖
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36 Reads
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