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    Mag Kan
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火影·卡卡西同人—紅葉相思
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「嗨。」女子露出笑容,舉起手打招呼,一如年少時的她。

在木葉豔陽下閃著的金色髮絲,以及那雙帶著平穩氣息的海藍眸色,都是那段靜好歲月遺留的回憶。

那段在卡卡西腦海中,快被埋沒了的回憶。

明明,不能再靠近了,可是她偶爾的一個側臉,都能讓他想起從前;她的一顰一笑,都能牽動他的心。

「對不起,卡卡西。」他聽見垂首的她說。

什麼時候,她才能不這麼卑微?什麼時候,才能多信任他一點?

「我從來不怕妳在黑暗中,我只怕妳在黑暗中,卻沒人陪妳。」卡卡西說,讓她的心底照進了一絲陽光。



※卡卡西 x 原創女主。
※先澄清,本作沒有要踩卡琳的意思。
※歡迎留言,批評也沒問題。
※文長慎入,節奏偏慢,如果想看速食文,前面左轉出去謝謝ˊˇˋ

第一次認真寫同人小說,也是目前為止完成度最高的故事(我的原創故事都還擱著呢),有描寫不好的地方請見諒(哭)。

由於在遇見卡卡西之前沒有讀過同人小說,不知道原來同人可以接受把原作劇情改掉這件事,所以一開始構思就在想我的劇情要怎麼跟原作劇情相容,費盡了我的頭腦(苦笑)。不過想想也是啦,創作一個角色就等同於改變該世界的某個元素,另一個平行世界的存在就是可能的了。

前期想塑造比較純真的感覺,所以日常居多,也算是想清楚交代兩人過去的故事。


其實劇情早就想好了,但是細節有夠難寫,要嘗試不讓作者插入,又可以把角色心理寫到位本身就有點難度了,加上常常都是寫到了才發現,卡卡西這個悶騷的傢伙,好像不會這樣...對不起,可是我很不想OOC啊!
嘛,總之,希望大家喜歡。


此處為搬運,主要連載在POPO,每個禮拜三和六更新,歡迎到POPO觀看:https://www.popo.tw/books/764439

歡迎手滑點收藏,也歡迎手癢留言,讓我這個苦逼作者知道 I am not alone ~

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