作品:【魚魚創挑第六期】那年盛夏,曾經的約定
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類型:小說
作者:柏木桐柊
▌結語心得464Please respect copyright.PENANAGfS8YvgNa7
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或許,她的影跡已成過往。窗櫺映入柔情似水,而匯聚成今夜的輾轉難眠。464Please respect copyright.PENANAeR16D5FWzN
我望不及妳眼底的星空漫步,而夏季裡還仍猶存妳餘溫。妳說的那些在我的世界又算得是什麼,留下的不過是在保險櫃裡的一抹笑意。我早已分不清,夏日我倆是否曾約定過,而捧上手中代表著祝福的黃玫瑰。464Please respect copyright.PENANATZORX3hYaQ
這不代表著我倆有過曾經。夏夜裡。獨自釀著夢中還偶然遇見的妳。464Please respect copyright.PENANAbvVECvtOba
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柏木桐柊,在短短數筆之下,運用了大量的暗喻及景色來比擬離情的傷感。醪、櫺兩字都是極其罕見的同義字,在詩句之間也靈活運用自己的特色