The sun vanishes, what else is there to it?

(Published by Emblem Publishing)

In the heart of the mystical realm of Elyria, nestled amidst towering mountains and emerald forests, lay the ancient city of Atheria, the last bastion of hope against the encroaching darkness. For centuries, the city had been under the protection of the Eleven Warriors, legendary heroes chosen by the gods to safeguard the realm from evil.

This is a collection of short stories, and this is the first out of 10. As i write it ill post on here. Ill design cover images later on. For now I’m borrowing the current image from here; https://dnd-amulets-of-saegkkal.fandom.com/wiki/Drow_%28Dark_Elves%29 For now i just need help critiquing what i have so far before I actually publish it.

These are special issues that may of may not be included in the official book releases. They include lore about characters, among other things. Every like and comment will help me determine weather to include them in the official book releases, or create a superset book just for these. Currently borrowing image from, https://dnd-amulets-of-saegkkal.fandom.com/wiki/Drow_%28Dark_Elves%29