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廢作自白
Joined Aug 28, 2021
廢作自白
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廢作自白 廢作自白 on 魔王傳
我覺得故事線很棒啊。但情節上，似乎就少了點情緒的主軸，所以效果有點發散。… more
廢作自白 廢作自白 on 魔王傳
@森重光,其實到第8段才進入故事。如果是我的話，前7段可能會作其他的視覺處理… more
廢作自白 廢作自白 on 魔王傳
故事線很好。但敘述節奏要調整一下。例如打鬥時，節奏應該是明快的，可惜被獨白拖慢了，少了緊張感。… more
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