“The transmission on that thing is insane. I’ll probably let you drive it one day.”
“Do you want to fuck your car or what?”
“Sorry, I’m just a car nut.”
“Yeah you wanna bust a nut in the tailpipe.”
“Shut the fuck up!”
“You’re only mad because I’m right.”
“Man fuck you.”
A loud crash and a sound of breaking glass rings out to the two bouncers.
“What the fuck was that!?” The bouncers looked over at the purple car and the front windshield was shattered with a small brick laying on top of the dashboard.
“What the fuck!” Both bouncers run over to the car. “Who the hell would do this! My fucking car!”
Chris sneaks up to the door and opens the door and walks in slowly closing it behind him.
“Heh, that actually worked. I’m proud of myself.” Chris smiled and turned around, immediately the smile faded away as a bunch of girls were looking at him. There are multiple mirrors and girls sitting down in chairs doing their makeup.
“How the hell did you get in here?” A woman asked.
“Uh, I, well.” Chris stuttered as he looked at all of the women looking at him. The women were wearing skimpy clothing and had tons of makeup on.
“Call security and get this kid outta here.” The woman begins to walk away.
“Wait! I need to know if I can get girl points here.” The woman stopped and all of the others looked shocked. “I’m only asking for a friend.”
“Now we really need to get security.”
“Why?”
“How the fuck do you know about that!?”
“I heard it from a friend of mine.”
“Who’s this friend of yours?”
“Ned.”
“Ned? I ain’t heard of no Ned. Whatever, girls! Detain him and I’ll get security!”
‘What!?”
The women all comply and walk toward Chris while the other woman is walking out the room.
“Wait!” A voice ringed out through the room, and everyone looked back at the curtains that were covering half of the room. A woman walked out of the curtain and into the room. “You stay away from that kid.”
The women step back away from Chris.
“Get outta here kid.” The woman said. She had long blonde hair with light brown eyes, she was dressed with a hoodie and shorts.
“Why?”
“You don’t need a reason, just get out of here and run back home.”
“But we need to tell the boss about this Vanesa!” A woman argued. “Do you know what he will do if he finds out if we let someone with inside knowledge leave!?”
“Are you saying you want another child to die?”
“No, it’s not that but, I’m worried about my job here.”
“So what? Is your job worth a life!? Give me a break.”
“Wait!” Chris interrupted, “People have died over Girl Points!?”
“Yes and if you keep going you’re gonna join them. Now leave!” Vanesa commanded.
“Well, thanks for warning me.” Chris opens the door and begins to leave until he stops. Ned’s still in there and he probably has no idea what shit he’s gotten himself into.
“Wait! My friend who told me about Girl Points is inside!” Chris shouted running back into the room.
“What?” Vanesa shuttered as her eyes widened.
“Ned! He’s inside the building!”
“No, not again.” Vanesa put her hand over her face. “Do you know where he is exactly?”
“Nope, not at all. Last time I saw him was when I boosted him up to get into the bathroom.”
“Alright, let’s go find him.”
“Really? You’ll do that?”
“Yep. Now what does he look like?” Vanesa began walking towards Chris until one of the women put her hand on Vanesa’s chest.
“I’m not letting you take that risk Vanesa! You could get killed!”
“That’s a chance I’m willing to take. Now, tell me what your friend looks like.” Vanesa pushed past the woman.
“He has black hair, wears glasses, and has blue eyes. Wearing a light green shirt and dark blue pants.”
“Great. Now let’s go.” Vanesa rushed through the backstage area and Chris quickly followed behind and they left the room in search of Ned.
“She’s gonna get that kid killed, including herself.”
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Ned is sitting down in a small storage closet, he’s sitting with his knees tucked into his chest rocking back and forth.
“What did I get myself into? What the fuck is so special about Girl Points that he was so pissed off when I knew it?” Ned was whispering to himself in mad ramblings. “Why are Girl Points never supposed to be talked about? What in the actual fuck did I stumble into? I mean, I can’t blame anyone else besides myself. God, why am I so fucking stupid!? All because I wanted an easier way to talk to Michelle? Fuck me! Should’ve just listened to Chris’s advice! I’m such a fucking idiot!”
Ned stops his whispering when he hears some footsteps run past him and some arguing amongst two men.
“Why can’t we find this fucking kid?”
“Don’t worry, he couldn’t have gone far! The bouncers at the front said they haven’t seen that kid walk past them?”
“Could he have snuck out the back?”
“No way, one of the strippers would’ve told us. They don’t like working here but we pay them well enough that they want to keep this job.”
The conversation then grew quieter and quieter because the two men’s footsteps got farther away.
“Whew, I’m good for now, maybe I should just make a break for it. Wait! What if they catch Chris? Oh, shit! Hopefully not.” As soon as Ned finishes his sentence the storage closet door flings open and the big guy that opened it held a gun and pointed it at Ned.
“Found him!” The guy shouted out into the backstage hallway. Ned screamed and covered his eyes as he heard more people coming.
“Get him out of there and into the backstage area!” A guy commanded as two guys came into the storage closet and picked up Ned by his shoulders and dragged him out. Ned started squirming when he felt the cold hard steel of a gun pressed up against his head.
“Better stop or we’ll make this job easier for us.” One of the guards threatened.
Ned was carelessly dragged all the way backstage and thrown onto the floor. Ned lifted himself up from off the ground and the same guard pointed a gun at him.
“Get your back against the wall and put your hands up as you do so!” The guy commanded and Ned quickly did what he told him to do.
With his hands in the air and his back facing the wall, he was now staring directly down the gun’s barrel as the guards were now discussing what to do with him.
“Should we just kill him?”
“No, I mean. I don’t know man! That’ll be another person here that’ll be chalked up to be a missing person.”
“But that’ll be the third one this month, the police will get suspicious.”
“Well do you want Jason to find out?”
“God no.”
“Then let’s just end this quickly, it’s not that hard.”
“No!” Ned shouted. “Can’t you just let me go?” Ned was now pleading with the guards.
“With the information you know, fuck no.”
“I promise not to tell anyone! Just please let me go!”
“Sorry kid, that ain’t happening.”
“Are Girl Points even worth this much!? This is fucking ridiculous!”
“You have no idea how important Girl Points are.”
Ned was now freaking out and was breathing heavily.
“They’re gonna kill me.” Ned said in his head. “I’m gonna fucking die here, and it’s all my fault.”
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Chris and Vanesa turn the corner to the backstage area where they see Ned getting held at gunpoint and multiple guards arguing on what to do.
“Shit!” Vanesa said under her breath. “They got to him already.”
“What the fuck do we do now!?” Chris asked. “Are they gonna fucking kill him?”
“Most likely, they don’t want to get into a kerfuffle with the boss.”
“So what do we do?”
“Wait here, I’ll need to get something.”
“Ok.”
“Actually, this’ll be better.”
“Wha-AH!”
Chris was shoved by Vanesa and he fell around the corner and fell face first into the ground. The guards near Ned immediately look at Chris and point their guns at him.
“What the fuck!?” Chris yelled and looked behind him and Vanesa had run off. “That fucking bitch!”
“Get over here right now or we’ll shoot!” Chris rushes to get up and puts his hands in the air and walks slowly towards the guards and Ned.
“Chris?” Ned said. “They got you too?”
“What else does it look like!?” Chris snapped back.
“Stop the bickering and get your back against the wall!” Chris got his back against the wall and was right next to Ned. The guards continue their arguing as they now have two kids to deal with now instead of one. Ned and Chris look at each other worryingly.
“Look Chris I’m sorry-”
“I don’t want to hear your apology, Ned! Because there is nothing you can say or do that’ll make me forgive you! Just face it, you fucked us up all because you just didn’t want to talk to a girl.”
“I know that that’s why I’m-”
“You two!” The guard yelled and pointed at both of them. “Come here and get on your knees with your hands behind your head.” The guard demanded and Ned and Chris complied, walking over and getting on their knees with their hands behind their backs.
“Sorry you two. Wish things were different.” The guard pulled out his gun and pointed it at Ned’s head, and closed his eyes.
“Wait!” A random bouncer came running into the room.
“What?” The guard responded, lowering his gun.
“Jason! He’s here!”
“No, that can’t be. He’s only here on Wednesdays, why the fuck is he here!?”
“He said someone called him.”
“Take the kids to where he can’t see him, we can’t have him finding out-”
“Don’t want me finding out what?” A man wearing a suit and tie walks in with a stride. He adjusts his tie as he continues to walk up to the guard. He looked like he was in his forties as he had gray hair and had a long beard.
“That has to be Jason.” Ned said to himself.
“Who are these two kids?” Jason questioned.
“Oh, they are my kids.” The guard quickly responded, making up a lie on the spot. Jason walks up to the guard's face and grabs him by the neck, choking him.
“Do you think I'm an idiot?”
“No-No-No sir!” The guard said in gasped breaths as Jason lifted him up off the ground.
“Then you gotta come up with a better lie than that if you want to trick me. I run a whole goddamn business for christ's sake!”
“Will d-d-do si-sir.”
“Oh, you won’t do anything anymore.”
“Huh?”
Jason reforms his grip around the guards neck and he snaps it. He broke the guard's neck and dropped him and his body plops onto the ground.
“There.” Jason wiped his hands clean. “That’s dealt with, now where were we?” Jason looks at Ned and Chris who are shivering. “That’s right, these two kids are randomly here on a deal night.”
“Sir, these two kids here know about Girl Points.” A random guard shyly said.
“I’m sorry, did I hear that correctly?”
“Yes sir.”
Jason started laughing hysterically. “Man, you’re a funny guy. Now tell me the truth.”
“That is the truth.”
Jason's smile smudged off his face and he looked over at Ned and Chris. “How do you guys fuck up this bad!?”
“Sorry sir.”
“You think sorry is gonna cut it!? Look at that guy in the ground, I fucking snapped his neck like a dry spaghetti noodle, you’d think I won’t do the same to you!?”
“Please sir, just calm down.”
“Are you trying to order me around now!?” Jason ran up and punched the guard in the face and he went flying into the wall. “You’re so fucking lucky I don’t kill you right now!” Jason sighed. “Now to deal with these kids. Give me your gun! I’ll just take care of them myself.” Jason forcibly ripped the gun out of a guard's hand.
“Wait! Wait!” Ned begged. “Why do you need to kill us? Can’t you just put us up for ransom or something?”
“Ha! I’ve never heard someone beg to be ransomed, but I’m sorry kid. That ain’t how it works around here.” Jason cocked the gun.
“Come on! You don’t need to do this!”
“You’re right, I don’t need to do it. I have to do it.”
Jason points the gun at Ned. Then a sudden and loud crash came through the door as Vanesa came running in with a briefcase.
“Stop that right now Jason!” She said.
“What is it now bitch?” Jason groaned. “Can’t you see I’m in the middle of something right now!?”
“That’s why I’m here. To stop you.”
“And what are you gonna do? I have a gun and you don’t.”
“Well, I have these.” Vanesa lifted the briefcase and shook it a little and whatever was in the briefcase made a little rattle as she shook it.
“Don’t tell me you-”
“That’s right. I’ve got all of the Girl Points!”
“You give those-” Before Jason could finish, Vanesa booked it out the door. “After her!” All of the guards chased after Vanesa and Jason was now left alone with Ned and Chris.
“This is our chance.” Chris was whispering to Ned. “Let’s get the fuck out of here.” Chris jumped up from the ground grabbing Ned’s arm and pulled him up.
“Not so fast.” Jason turned and swung the gun around to point at them both. “Don’t think I forgot about you two.”
“Oh come the fuck on! Just let us go!”
“I’ve already explained, that’s not gonna happen, now get back down on your knees!” Ned and Chris do so and Jason walks up to them and right into their face. “You two fuckers have caused such an uproar in this place it’s not even funny. Just close your eyes, this’ll be quick. Now, who to shoot first.” Jason kept pointing the gun back and forth, like he was playing eeny meeny miny moe. Jason finally landed on Ned and pushed the gun against his forehead. “You.”
Just as Jason was about to pull the trigger, Chris takes the opportunity and grabs Jason’s legs, sweeping him off the ground and flat on his back. In the process of that, Jason lost hold of the gun and went sliding across the room.
“Ned!” Chris shouted. “The gun! Get it!”
“Right!” Ned got up from the ground and leapt toward the gun.
“These fucking kids!” Jason kicked Chris in the face and off of his foot. He then leapt toward Ned punching him in the back of the head and directly into the ground. Jason was now in possession of the gun and quickly swung it around. Chris picks up a glass perfume bottle he found in a box backstage and throws it perfectly at Jason. The glass shattered directly on his eyes and the perfume went all over his face.
Jason screamed and started shooting randomly all around the room at hopes of hitting Ned or Chris. Glass had gotten logged into his right eye and he couldn’t see. Luckily none of the bullets hit Ned or Chris but everything else in the room. Jason soon ran out of bullets and was now left defenseless, on top of that he was also blind.
“Run!” Ned yelled as he started rushing out of the room and Chris followed right behind him, leaving Jason bleeding and blind.
“You motherfuckers! I’ll get you! I swear on my mothers grave!” Jason screamed as he clambered to the floor with his eye bleeding.
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Ned and Chris were sprinting up the street and had been nonstop ever since they ran out of the strip club. It’s been a good minute and Ned starts to lose his breath and slows down. Chris sprints right past him and then begins to slow down, and stops to catch his breath. There was a good thirty seconds of just Ned and Chris breathing heavily.
“Whew.” Ned said, still out of breath. “That was fucking amazing what you did back there. Really saved our asses.” Chris runs over to Ned and pushes him to the ground.
“Are you fucking serious right now!?” Chris was fuming.
“What?”
“You know exactly what! You can’t act all happy like that when we almost fucking died!”
“I was just praising you.”
“I don’t give a flying fuck! You put us in that situation in the first place!”
“I’m sorry, I just-”
“You just wanted to do what!?”
“I just wanted an easier way to talk to Michelle.”
‘So you went to a fucking strip club!”
Ned didn’t respond, only looked down at the strip club.
“You’ve now condemned us to be chased by a fucking mafia of some kind! That Jason dude isn’t gonna let me stabbing his eye out just slip by. He’s gonna hunt me down till the ends of the earth. God, you’re such a fucking idiot!”
“Look, Chris. Even if they wanted to find us, it’ll be impossible. They don’t even know any of our names.”
“They still can look for our faces dumbass!”
“But they-”
“Don’t even talk to me right now anymore! I’m heading home and going to bed, see ya tomorrow, I guess.” Chris walked away into the cold night and the darkness. Ned was left there to sit in the street lamp light as a car passed by honking at him for being in the bike lane.
“I am stupid.” Ned said to himself. He got up on his feet and looked at the moon, it was a full moon and it looked absolutely stunning. “I should just talk to her, I’m being ridiculous.” Ned began walking with his hands in his pockets and into the dark night
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