此作者文筆非常好,具有美感且華麗的,能充分讓讀者有畫面感。
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簡介有完整且詳細的描述劇情內容,好評!
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依作者的文筆,如果能用更婉轉且具有想像空間的對話,相信簡介會更有吸引力。
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''仕女做錯事''、''囚犯與弓箭''這兩段劇情來說明了部分亞歷山大的個性,這點是非常多作者做不到的,居多都是以口吻。347Please respect copyright.PENANA2vfmSEzTs9
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是扭曲的,並不是像表面上的仁慈。347Please respect copyright.PENANAxQjeytd9KC
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作者文筆是非常好,但描繪過多也是會讓讀者視覺疲乏的,這點是我認為這部作品的小部分缺失。
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我知道這是你的優點,但太多抽象的詞彙是會讓觀眾難受的,這點請多加注意!347Please respect copyright.PENANAlVhLutTiqL
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在第五章裡 更清楚的描寫了亞歷山大的內心慾望,他想要的只是一個認同,一個擁抱,一個安慰,但為什麼得到這些的總是這個弟弟,不是我?347Please respect copyright.PENANApsm1piWYJ7
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他內心是這麼想的,但必須在母親面前展現的十分的和善,這方面作者的筆法可謂是展現的淋漓盡致,十分精彩!347Please respect copyright.PENANAtJQalIA0cb
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作者在人物刻劃上面,我相信是做了很大程度上的努力,在各方各面上並沒有抓到明顯的缺點,從小時候的回想到長大後的故事,個性上基本都是一致的。347Please respect copyright.PENANAyXprXPpQ2p
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感覺在亞歷山大上,作者用比較隱晦的方式描寫他根本就不愛弟弟,而是只是單純想要譏笑他的那種感覺,在人情世故上卻做得完美無缺。347Please respect copyright.PENANAGAJIKPvJH9
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不得不說,你是我目前評的第三本書,從人物刻劃、劇情安排都是做得非常好。347Please respect copyright.PENANAKUnUPcfJPa
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唯獨就是我的個人原因,不是那麼喜歡如此華麗的詞彙。347Please respect copyright.PENANA9gkNlobMYU
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像我上述所說,偶爾的話我能接受,但整篇都是以這樣的形式去描寫,我看得有一點不舒服。347Please respect copyright.PENANAG4FU6zlewg
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第八章也明確說明了米卡的內心,以及他真實的想法。347Please respect copyright.PENANAbKYpNv7ngr
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能從動作、女僕的態度,以及亞歷山大的缺席,這三點去剖析出米卡的想法。
其實作者如果沒有完整說出來米卡的內心話,觀眾們也能察覺的。347Please respect copyright.PENANANH4ZrNPcDa
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再次讓我稱讚你的文筆。347Please respect copyright.PENANAKfYJnBjIn7
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評語心得:347Please respect copyright.PENANAi6XVlJf6Md
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1. 文筆具有美感且十分的流暢。
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2. 人物刻劃的非常細膩,並且在每一位身上都有不一樣的特點。347Please respect copyright.PENANA1ErKeM19mu
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3. 由於個人不是那麼喜歡宮廷劇,所以我就不多加贅述了,但至少能讓我看得是舒服的。347Please respect copyright.PENANA54OpHZZ5Jg
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4. 上述所說,文筆華麗雖好,但牛排吃久了也會想吃平民美食吧!347Please respect copyright.PENANAT7k9WVOAHZ
這點請作者多加注意。347Please respect copyright.PENANA1Pe468TQRl
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總分:85347Please respect copyright.PENANA9NeQ0WFjIo
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一部從人物刻劃到劇情節奏安排都十分到位的作品。347Please respect copyright.PENANAhiZHP9P7at
5分是扣在過多的華麗詞彙上,另外的10分是比較主觀的。347Please respect copyright.PENANAR7A8LmTLvK
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沒有那麼喜歡宮廷劇,以及留給作者的進步空間。347Please respect copyright.PENANAMZ7LjqeNW7
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個人認為這部已經算得上是蕉園的頂流作品了。347Please respect copyright.PENANAIUH437Luer
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結論: 上乘之作347Please respect copyright.PENANAIMaaakExhy
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