
Okay, soo uuuhhhhhh where to start with this one?327Please respect copyright.PENANADxXRXOYo5c
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Let's talk outlining and then go off into Sports land. 327Please respect copyright.PENANAkHEU49NpRv
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Outlining 327Please respect copyright.PENANA5uOfDQNvQp
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So The outline for what I am Calling Part 2 of the book is about halfway done. As it stands, the document is approximately 8590 words. before I even delve deeper into what that means, let me get some basic terms out of the way. 327Please respect copyright.PENANATdnjZLb8We
I have decided to break up the book into 3 parts, corresponding to where they take place in the three-act structure. The only reason is that It helps me focus and keeps my mind organized. We are soon approaching the end of part one, which should conclude the initial set/introduction to all the POV characters and the world. At the time of my writing this, I am currently writing Chapter 9, which will be the end of Part One officially.327Please respect copyright.PENANAdlfak1e2oW
Part 2 will be the majority of the book, and at the time of writing this, the outlines for chapters 10-16 are already done, which I suspect to be only half of the chapters needed before part 2 is concluded. 327Please respect copyright.PENANADLN7iyIvC3
I am not sure when Chapter 9 will be out but assuming by my average time of writing each chapter, I am guessing anywhere from a week to a week and a half. 327Please respect copyright.PENANAcA1x48yYr2
I've got a whole ass tournament arc planned, and hopefully, going to delve into more character pasts and motivations and keep raising the stakes as far as I can take them. It should be pretty dope, so please, If you come across this blog first and are curious as to what I am talking about, go to our profile, click on THE COMING OF THE PILGRIM story, and check it out for yourself. If you like it enough, remember to bookmark this blog and the story itself so It notifies you of any updates. Thank you!327Please respect copyright.PENANAOdYzCcp4VC
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Name Changes327Please respect copyright.PENANAfDEFKWC3FJ
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This is pretty simple and self-explanatory. I changed two names in the story—one on the Outline for the Wisemasters and one for a character first introduced in chapter 2. Najara's dad was previously named Tezcatoke, but I had received several comments about it being too hard to pronounce by my IRL friends. And I am inclined to agree. So I changed it to Berjón, just to make things easier. At the time of this upload, I have made the changes needed. 327Please respect copyright.PENANAsWlmjJojbr
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LETS GO DEVILS, LETS GO!!!327Please respect copyright.PENANAZmnFjd665N
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WHY SHOULD YOU CARE ABOUT THIS PART? IDK NOT MY FUCKING PROBLEM SCADDLE THE FUCK ON OUTTA HERE IF YOU'RE NOT ON THE UP AND UP OR, GOD FORBID, A RANGERS FAN! YUCK!327Please respect copyright.PENANAax6JEyQkBJ
Lol, but in all seriousness, the wife and I have been watching the series between the Devils and Rangers very closely. It's heading to game 7 on home ice, so fingers crossed we see it through to round 2, and if not well, our team gave one hell of a performance. 327Please respect copyright.PENANA1nIxoQtC32
But last night's game was fucking painful to watch, I swear if Palat didn't catch two penalties back to back in the last stretch of the 1st, giving the Rangers crazy momentum going into the second, I'm sure I'd be writing about a very different game. From that point forward, it just felt like our boys were playing just not to lose, which blows, especially because we saw what the Devils are truly capable of when they're confident in the last 3 games. Praying and hoping we can pull it together by Monday and show the haters what underdogs are capable of!327Please respect copyright.PENANAUKAh1mw4Qy
I bring all this up to say that writing has been going slow precisely because of this, and if we make it to the second round, it'll go even slower, and if *whispers* we make it to the finals????? Bro, you can expect to see me when I wake the fuck back up, lol. 327Please respect copyright.PENANAq9MjkaCRLW
Yet if we lose this coming Monday, it'll be back to regularly scheduled programming, as they say, and I'll be turning out chapters per usual. If you've been watching, whos your team? lemme know and drop a comment. Okay, I'm gone, I'm out, see yall later, peace. 327Please respect copyright.PENANA00IYGDNgV4
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